Wavebeat Shore

They're not that bad, but they're not that good either.

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vitellaryjr
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Wavebeat Shore

Postby vitellaryjr » Mon Nov 10, 2014 10:19 pm

Hello everyone! This is a level that is in my episode, 1-6. I hope you like it!

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Download: Don't mind the thing in the corner of the screenshots. I didn't notice it was there until now.

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Re: Wavebeat Shore

Postby PROX » Tue Nov 11, 2014 12:38 am

Prox's unofficial level review:
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A beach level! 'Nuff said

Design: This level had its ups and downs with the design. There was no clash or cutoff, and there was hardly any repetition.The level was also a decent length. My complaints are that hardly any BGOs were placed. There were some pretty tricky jumps that shouldn't have been so tricky.Don't get me wrong, I love a good challenge in a level, but some of those jumps were rage inducing due to a low ceiling, or some strange water placements which brings us to the next complaint: water placements. Some of the water placements were good and I liked the idea of the water rising and falling, but the floating water needs to go. Some of those jumps were rage inducing for me because of them. Also it didn't exactly look very good. I could understand if it was a SMG themed level, but as far as I can tell, it's not.
Score: 5/10

NPC Placement: There was no variety to the NPCs and the 1st half of the level had none whatsoever. My suggestion would be to add koopa troopas, piranha plants (especially the ones that act like volcano plants), bloopers, etc. Some were also oddly placed. Also why is there a star floating with nothing beneath it?
Score 3/10

Atmosphere: The atmosphere worked well for the level. The tileset used was nice, the music was fitting. The only things that killed the atmosphere for me were the floating water, and the lack of BGO placement.
Score 7/10

Overall Score: 5/10
There were some nice ideas, but there's still plenty of room for improvement.

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Re: Wavebeat Shore

Postby KateBulka » Tue Nov 11, 2014 7:30 am

Is weird level but nice from 3th Face

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Re: Wavebeat Shore

Postby Danny » Mon Nov 24, 2014 8:16 pm

Alright, this level is kind of short and has no real gimmicks.

Did you forget to put enemies in the level or something? There were only a few Cheep-Cheeps here and there. I didn't even die in this level and it was way too easy. There was a lack of everything, mostly enemies.

I don't have much to say about this level at all other than it's short and it has no enemies. Really.

3/10


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