SMB: Archipelago of Bowser (Needed a Level Designer PM me!!!)

[DarkDragon94]

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Story:
Princess Peach invited Mario to a party, but Bowser has invaded the kingdom of mushrooms, Mario arrived there and had the news, Mario climbed the towers of the castle, saw the Airship Bowser and jumped on it, but Bowser discovered and let him Mario unconscious and woke up on an island

Screenshots:

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Islands
1 - Beachs Grasslands
2 - Dry Dry Lands
3 - Seaside Islands
4 - ?
5 - ?
6 - Rocky Mountains
7 - ?
8 - ?

Needed a Level Designer and Beta Testers!!! PM me

The Team
Graphics Designer
-DarkDragon94
-PlayerYoshi14 (It is not exactly a "Graphic Designer" it just lent me some graphics.)

Level Designers
-DarkDragon94

Beta Testers
-AeroMatter
-Linik

Additional levels
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the Graphics of being used:

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Squishy Rex CGFX Pack
SMB3 Sednaiur GFX Pack
reghrhres GFX Pack

Download (BETA Version):

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The level 1-1 to the level 2-3https://www.sendspace.com/file/av3a0g

Progress
Island 1: - 100%
Island 2: - 100%
Island 3: - 16%
Island 4: - 0%
Island 5: - 0%
Island 6: - 0%
Island 7: - 0%
Island 8: - 0%

All Progress
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[TurtleJosh52]

Screenshots are required when posting!

[DarkDragon94]

Screenshots are required when posting!

Sorry! can not put is giving error!!!

[PixelPest]

Screenshots are required when posting!

Don't backseat moderate. Use the report button instead

[Enchlore]

This actually looks pretty competent in both level and map design. However it seems you are using a translator but not typing correctly in it.

You have the following sentence in the "History" section (which should be "story" and not "history"):

The Bowser invaded the Mushroom Kingdom and rapitou the princess and leveu her with his airship [...]

You had "raptou" written as "rapitou" and it ended up not translating properly, same with "levou" which came out as "leveu". A more correct sentence (and I'm correcting other grammar errors too) would be "Bowser invaded Mushroom Kingdom, captured the princess and took her with his airship". I'm pointing this out because presentation is an important part of advertising your project.

If you want help with proofreading the episode I'm open to it. I can help with graphic design too, though I can't commit full-time (a little busy).

[DarkDragon94]

@Enchlore google translator does not translate right but I will fix!

[The Thwomp King]

Looks nice so far. Don't be afraid to work on the other worlds though. i understand you're going in order, but I personally found it easier working all over the place. Some days I feel like working on a different type of level and not forcing yourself to get a level done that's next in the lineup allows you to get a lot more done in my opinion.

Anyway I wish you best of luck with this project.

[DarkDragon94]

Looks nice so far. Don't be afraid to work on the other worlds though. i understand you're going in order, but I personally found it easier working all over the place. Some days I feel like working on a different type of level and not forcing yourself to get a level done that's next in the lineup allows you to get a lot more done in my opinion.

Anyway I wish you best of luck with this project.

Thank you! Before I did it !!! And good luck with Super Mario Country!

[Alagirez]

Sorry for bumping this.
The screens looks pretty nice, especially the SMW level ones and the sky totem ones, and the design looks good. I'm looking forward for this project. Great job!
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Untick "Auto Align" to put the bushes correctly.

[DarkDragon94]

Sorry for bumping this.
The screens looks pretty nice, especially the SMW level ones and the sky totem ones, and the design looks good. I'm looking forward for this project. Great job!
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Untick "Auto Align" to put the bushes correctly.

Thank you so much!!!

[RudeGuy]

How can you get the dragon coin in screen 14?

[HeroLinik]

How can you get the dragon coin in screen 14?

By using a purple Yoshi?

[DarkDragon94]

How can you get the dragon coin in screen 14?

By using a purple Yoshi?

How can you get the dragon coin in screen 14?

By using a purple Yoshi?

P-Switch!!

[HeroLinik]

P-Switch!!

Won't that turn the Dragon Coin into a block though?

[DarkDragon94]

P-Switch!!

Won't that turn the Dragon Coin into a block though?

but you get the coins and waiting for the effect of p-switch pass, and you get a dragon coin. Is actually an A coin or Advenced Coin unintentionally I changed the graphics!

[RudeGuy]

That would make the player wait, and that's not good. I'd put a bob-omb or a purple yoshi near that place, instead.

[DarkDragon94]

That would make the player wait, and that's not good. I'd put a bob-omb or a purple yoshi near that place, instead.

but p-switch gets back so do not expect much trouble and turns up a challenge to get the dragon coin.

[Mable]

P-Switch!!

Won't that turn the Dragon Coin into a block though?

but you get the coins and waiting for the effect of p-switch pass, and you get a dragon coin. Is actually an A coin or Advenced Coin unintentionally I changed the graphics!

What? So you changed the Graphic with one that has the A in it? Sry i can't really understand the way you talk. It's still called Dragon Coin just google it.