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Factory produced (now probably with good screenshots)

Posted: Wed Jan 02, 2019 3:30 pm
by Doesntpostverymuch
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world 1
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world 2
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world 3
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world 4
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world 5
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world 6




Includes the entire thing!
Download (google drive): https://drive.google.com/file/d/1xhweSc ... sp=sharing
If download doesn't work please inform me asap
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Progress: Enviorment invasion (world 1) 10/10
Lava Laboratory (world 2): 11/11(added new level)
Frozen Facility (world 3): 9/9
Oil Ocean (World 4) 5/5 (may change # of levels)
Lifeless land (World 5) 6/6
Above the smog (World 6) 3/3

I made .0001% of the graphics (aka some of the oil graphics for that one level), all graphics belong to whoever made them

if you are offended by the use of your graphics please pm me so we can work out a compromise.

2020/4/4 UPDATE: Replaced all npcs and bgos imcompatible with the new version of smbx (if i missed one please tell),Fixed some buggy graphics,Finished world 2, redid train level,

Re: Factory produced (now probably with good screenshots)

Posted: Mon Jan 14, 2019 5:31 pm
by Devan2002
I'm looking at this and I notice some things with the world map screenshots, several of them geographically look impossible. Just try picturing them at different angles without them seemingly floating and you'll see it also looks weird. Also, both your world map and level screenshots could use some decorations. Also, try to shape the islands so they aren't so "square."

Re: Factory produced (now probably with good screenshots)

Posted: Mon Jan 14, 2019 9:30 pm
by Doesntpostverymuch
Devan2002 wrote:
Mon Jan 14, 2019 5:31 pm
I'm looking at this and I notice some things with the world map screenshots, several of them geographically look impossible. Just try picturing them at different angles without them seemingly floating and you'll see it also looks weird. Also, both your world map and level screenshots could use some decorations. Also, try to shape the islands so they aren't so "square."
The idea is that the facotries have changed the land and caused it to look unnaturally and manufactored, but thanks for the advice.

Re: Factory produced (now probably with good screenshots)

Posted: Sat Apr 04, 2020 2:37 pm
by Cedur
Surprisingly enough, this project is still alive. He talked about it on the smbxprojects server and edited the first post today.

Re: Factory produced (now probably with good screenshots)

Posted: Sat Apr 04, 2020 2:45 pm
by Doesntpostverymuch
Yeah, i just got alot of freetime to work on it now. Plus I just got back into making smbx levels. So i tried to put the project into smbx 2 and then updated smbx and decided to update the whole project and work on it a little more. Some improvements include Preventing Possible softlocks in Drilling station, Updated world map in some areas, and of course, the addition of a bonus level in world 2.

Re: Factory produced (now probably with good screenshots)

Posted: Sat Apr 04, 2020 3:03 pm
by BroccoliRampage
Doesntpostverymuch wrote:
Mon Jan 14, 2019 9:30 pm
Devan2002 wrote:
Mon Jan 14, 2019 5:31 pm
I'm looking at this and I notice some things with the world map screenshots, several of them geographically look impossible. Just try picturing them at different angles without them seemingly floating and you'll see it also looks weird. Also, both your world map and level screenshots could use some decorations. Also, try to shape the islands so they aren't so "square."
The idea is that the facotries have changed the land and caused it to look unnaturally and manufactored, but thanks for the advice.
Cool idea!

Perhaps you could keep the grass/dirt/stone surfaces as they are but change the sides of each island to give the impression that each island is a steel base with the landscape perched on top. Or, have the islands appear to be floating above the surface of the water which will also add to the impression that they're constructed rather than natural landforms. Or if you mean them to still be natural landscapes but modified and shaped, maybe the outer contours of each island's surface should look artificial with the "natural" landscaping only in the centers. In any case, I think it's a novel concept and worth building upon further.

Re: Factory produced (now probably with good screenshots)

Posted: Sun Apr 05, 2020 8:19 am
by Doesntpostverymuch
BroccoliRampage wrote:
Sat Apr 04, 2020 3:03 pm
Doesntpostverymuch wrote:
Mon Jan 14, 2019 9:30 pm
Devan2002 wrote:
Mon Jan 14, 2019 5:31 pm
I'm looking at this and I notice some things with the world map screenshots, several of them geographically look impossible. Just try picturing them at different angles without them seemingly floating and you'll see it also looks weird. Also, both your world map and level screenshots could use some decorations. Also, try to shape the islands so they aren't so "square."
The idea is that the facotries have changed the land and caused it to look unnaturally and manufactored, but thanks for the advice.
Cool idea!

Perhaps you could keep the grass/dirt/stone surfaces as they are but change the sides of each island to give the impression that each island is a steel base with the landscape perched on top. Or, have the islands appear to be floating above the surface of the water which will also add to the impression that they're constructed rather than natural landforms. Or if you mean them to still be natural landscapes but modified and shaped, maybe the outer contours of each island's surface should look artificial with the "natural" landscaping only in the centers. In any case, I think it's a novel concept and worth building upon further.
That's certainly good advice, i'll see what i can do.

Re: Factory produced (now finished)

Posted: Sat Apr 18, 2020 10:28 am
by Doesntpostverymuch
Quick (late) update, factory produced is now finished.

Re: Factory produced (now finished)

Posted: Sat Apr 18, 2020 10:31 am
by Chanceux2
Doesntpostverymuch wrote:
Sat Apr 18, 2020 10:28 am
Quick (late) update, factory produced is now finished.
Your posting it in episodes?

Re: Factory produced (now finished)

Posted: Sat Apr 18, 2020 10:37 am
by Doesntpostverymuch
Chanceux2 wrote:
Sat Apr 18, 2020 10:31 am
Doesntpostverymuch wrote:
Sat Apr 18, 2020 10:28 am
Quick (late) update, factory produced is now finished.
Your posting it in episodes?
I don't know if anyone will care, but i guess i will, it IS finished.