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IzIcy wrote:Fuck me in the bum-hole (Not literally...), you deliver some outstanding graphics on this forums!

Matt_The_Slime wrote:Gosh darn it, why are all of your graphics so good!?

The Dwarven Digger wrote:Wow, these look amazing!
Also, on the steel tileset, could you have some sort of fill tile to go between the beams? I would really like to use that tileset for a factory level or something, and I think a fill tile would be good. Also, maybe you could make some conveyor belts in a similar style?

crazydev wrote:

The Dwarven Digger wrote:Wow, these look amazing!
Also, on the steel tileset, could you have some sort of fill tile to go between the beams? I would really like to use that tileset for a factory level or something, and I think a fill tile would be good. Also, maybe you could make some conveyor belts in a similar style?

Thanks ! And I did include a fill tile, actually. I will work on a conveyor belt soon.

The Dwarven Digger wrote:

crazydev wrote:

The Dwarven Digger wrote:Wow, these look amazing!
Also, on the steel tileset, could you have some sort of fill tile to go between the beams? I would really like to use that tileset for a factory level or something, and I think a fill tile would be good. Also, maybe you could make some conveyor belts in a similar style?

Thanks ! And I did include a fill tile, actually. I will work on a conveyor belt soon.

I see, It's just it didn't look like there was one from the screenshots. Is it the darkened one on the sort of vertical strip on the right of this screenshot? Or is it something else?

crazydev wrote:

The Dwarven Digger wrote:

crazydev wrote: Thanks ! And I did include a fill tile, actually. I will work on a conveyor belt soon.

I see, It's just it didn't look like there was one from the screenshots. Is it the darkened one on the sort of vertical strip on the right of this screenshot? Or is it something else?

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On the bottom of the screenshot yo can see the fill. The blocks on the right are a sizable

crazydev wrote:

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witchking666 wrote:

crazydev wrote:

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Most of this actually looks really good. I'm going to give feedback on every screenshot, so here is a spoiler.

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Ok, I allready gave quite a lot of feedback on the cloud/bricks tileset and I see you have fixed the contrast and added some BGO's (which look awesome by the way). There are still some issues like the colour of the sizables and the lack of shading on the side of the bricks. But it looks quite good now.

The castle tileset looks fucking if you ask me. Unlike with the bricks in your cloud tileset you nailed the side-shading here. One thing that could make this even better might be an in-tile decoration of a window or a set of iron bars.

The wood tileset looks awesome! You could however add some screws/nails in the wood to make it look even cooler. A few wood-related bgo's also woulnd't hurt.

I don't really know what to say about the purple thing. I mean, nice fill and all but what is the green shit on top? It is way too bright to be anything natural however and it clashes with the rest of the tileset. If it's grass you should change the colours to a more natural shade of green. If its slime the color is fine but the shading isn't make it more smooth and gooey.

I allready expressed my thoughts for the dirt tileset in the WIP graphics thread, it looks dope but the walkable part is a bit weird.

The ruins tileset is fucking dope. Don't change anything about it.

The nighttime bluegrass tileset is pretty cool. It works perfectly with SMB1 night background and I'm guessing its intended to be used with it. I am really a fan of monocolouring the snifits because the blue npc's don't stand out from the background and tileset making them harder to notice during gameplay.

The asteroid/desert tileset looks pretty cool even though it's very simplistic, it would work great in a SMW styled environment. The desert's colours should however be changed into a more desatured shade of yellow/orange. It makes more sense as sand than bright orange. Look at PROX's deserts for example, they use the perfect colour and because of this, they look more realistic.

That factory looks super neat! Especially the chains and the way you incorporated the danger stripes pattern everywhere. You might want to make the background wall version of the stripes quite a bit darker, they look too similar to the solid ones now.

The special blocks look cool, especially the brick blocks. They seem very NSMB-ish to me, dont know why.

Anyways, if you keep improving like you are you will eventually become a great GFX artist. Keep it up!

crazydev wrote:Thanks for all your criticisms! That was very helpful. And, yeah lol the purple tileset is my worst, i made that when i was really rusty and first came back to graphics-making; I can do better than that now.