All Star Heroes Fusion: Clash of Pluto (Story)

[Suckerman7 GM]

CLASH OF PLUTO: PART I

(Many many miles from the Earth, in a forgotten and desolate planet...)

A colony on the planet is making a critical meeting at the moment. The leader of the colony shows up and starts to talk with his ultrasound megaphone.

???: All troops commence! We're now ready to assault the Earth!! We've waited many many years just to conquer the universe. But Master Legion has failed to a special justice team of idiots. But we're going to take revenge of our master! From the time since we discovered Plutonium inside the planet's core, now our machines and mechs will no longer exhaust from low energy. We can continously attack to the forces of Earth! What are we waiting for? Prepare the machines, mechs and begin to the assault of Earth's wreckage!!!

Everybody shouted loudly and proudly to their leader.

(Meanwhile, inside an underground base...)

Our heroes have just defeated a new threat of Rageful Cyborgs. And now they're resting and having fun.

MARIO: Congratulations team! A new threat has just been solved! And now we deserved a huge break!

LUIGI: That's right bro! We can rest and have lunch together at Princess Peach's Castle! But I want to talk about what we've done to these pesky robots!

SONIC: Yeah, my supersonic speed slowed them down. And your tactical moves crushed them easily!

NARUTO:How about my cryptic powers? They also did great job. Anyways, we defeated them to... (BOOM!) What was that?

MARIO: I don't know. Are these the cyborgs again?

SHADOW: (Tries to read the future) No, they aren't. It's something appearing from the space! There are robots falling from the space!

EVERYONE: What?!

MASTER CHIEF: Yes, he's right. They are Pluto's colony robots!

Everybody just became quiet and looked at Master Chief and Shadow.

MASTER CHIEF: Yes, he was my commander in the 16th Galactic Army. We've gone to a mission to destroy a space squid. But he had just made a stupid plan. He preferred to defeat it directly. But it wasn't gone well, The Space Squid picked Pluto up and launched him far away. And nobody has gotten the news of Pluto. But he's just came along with his massive colony of robots and troops. And he won't stop until he gains something!

MARIO: So, we have to stop him before he destroys the city! Team, commence up!

(Meanwhile, In the city...)

PLUTO: Everybody in this miserable planet, listen up!

When Pluto couldn't let others hear himself, he just used his megaphone again.

PLUTO: EVERYBODY ON THIS MISERABLE PLANET, LISTEN UP!!!

Everybody's ears got deaf because the megaphone had ultrasound system and the people got hypnotized from the sound of megaphone.

EVERYONE: We all hail Pluto, our master in the space!

Pluto laughed sinisterly and dramatically. But a rocket got past him.

PLUTO: What? WHO shot that rocket?

MASTER CHIEF: Hey, did you missed me commander?

PLUTO: You, you traitor! How dare you come and show up?

MASTER CHIEF: I'm here to defend the Earth from threats like you! And I'm going to stop!

PLUTO: So, you choose your own side. But you'll be perished just like your friends! Troops, attack!!!

TO BE CONTINUED...

[Suckerman7 GM]

Anyways, this story hasn't stolen or taken from somebody. I made it myself. All copyrights reserved to the creators of the heroes. Pluto made by me.

[Mable]

But pluto is made by Walt Disney.

[Suckerman7 GM]

No, it's not. Pluto is a space conqueror. With the name, he'll be scary, cool and mysterious. Because he lives in the planet Pluto. Got it?

[LordYoshi999]

ok
ill uh give a good review of this story i suppose.
first of all, why are they underground? why aren't they above ground? it annoys me
2nd you call them 'pesky robots' and then you call them cyborgs. make up your mind

SHADOW: (Tries to read the future) No, they aren't. It's something appearing from the space! There are robots falling from the space!

get rid of 'the'

MARIO: So, we have to stop him before he destroys the city! Team, commence up!

'commence up' all i know is this is wrong in so many ways, it just sounds...strange.

also you shouldn't be putting BAM sound BOOM effects PEW in CRASH sentences.

[Artemis008]

But pluto is made by Walt Disney.

And Pluto's a Sailor Moon character, and a Dream Works robot too.
Nice fic BTW