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Suckerman7 GM
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Postby Suckerman7 GM » Thu Jul 16, 2015 3:46 am
Your episode has two problems;
1. The World Map is Extremely BLAND!!!
2. There aren't any LEVEL SCREENSHOTS!!!
Anyways, I'd like to see this topic with more screenshots 
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glitch4
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Postby glitch4 » Thu Jul 16, 2015 5:19 am
Probably add some more sceneries in world map and it will be better and not empty.
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Mable
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Postby Mable » Thu Jul 16, 2015 5:59 am
What's the mediafire link even supposed to be.
Also the map looks really bad. Sad that you didn't take any advice from anyone.
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drmario1
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Postby drmario1 » Thu Jul 16, 2015 6:59 am
did none of you read why i posted this? i posted this to test if the star warp worked
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underFlo
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Postby underFlo » Thu Jul 16, 2015 7:04 am
What is an .lnk file? Please upload it as an actual file.
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Mable
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Postby Mable » Thu Jul 16, 2015 7:20 am
drmario1 wrote:did none of you read why i posted this? i posted this to test if the star warp worked
Did you not see what i replied? Nobody can test this also since you uploaded a ink file. Don't be ignorant if you want us to see if it works post the actual test. If you only did it for you it's pointless. I guess you learnt nothing.
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drmario1
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Postby drmario1 » Thu Jul 16, 2015 7:38 am
i edited the post it's now a .zip file
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Mable
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Postby Mable » Thu Jul 16, 2015 9:43 am
Also why is it.. too if this is the second one shouldn't it be two?
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drmario1
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Postby drmario1 » Thu Jul 16, 2015 12:30 pm
It's a joke.....( it's like dumb and dumber too ) i did it that why on purpose just like how Mario is spelt merio
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Mable
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Postby Mable » Thu Jul 16, 2015 2:15 pm
OH LOOK there are some levels i can talk about now:
Castle: Looks boring and bland. The blue switch and blocks aren't really needed you can just jump over the yellow one and kill the 2 goombas to get the red ones appear. The Birdo fight? Easy the thwomps only come down if you jump high enough. They and the hammmer bros aren't any danger really. As soon you got birdo down you can use the eggs to kill the other npcs it's easy to stand under the hammer bro so you don't even get hurt. Killing the thwomps is easy, bc they only come down if you jump high as i said you can either kill them or not.
Theres a chance where you can't complete the level bc Birdo can glitch through the blocks when you change the switches.
Cave: Also boring and bland. You get two choices either take the star or get to boom boom. But now again the pipe entrance to the tank section is once again in the middle, in short 1 block to high again. The tank section doesn't make any sense though. Let's talk about the battle it's not any harder again the Thwomps only fall if you jump really high the only good thing here is that after you killed boom boom you can earn a shitload of 1-ups due all the npcs in there.
Damp: It's just a boring switch level there is no puzzle mechanic in their all you do is hitting the switches in both sections.
Deja: This is getting a thing now. Again another boring lazily made level you can directly see you were like "Damn i am to lazy making good looking levels" All you do is walking to the right get the star thats it.
You can go in the pipe but.. all you get are some coins like the only ever used npc ones so far.
First: It's terrible can't say anything more to it cause it's so bad
Lock: Terrible you get the key from the ?-Block and go in the building and theres the star. The end.
Maze: Oh look again we have those wrong placed pipe entrances it looks so funny when mario goes in them. Oh about the level itself? It's not really a maze it's pretty easy and solved in under 30 seconds or less. Oh right theres this warp which gives you a hammer suit and a yoshi so if you need both just do this level again and again.
Switch: Has switches but doesn't look that good and i can't tell much about it cause it's nothing special tbh.
Tower: Yet again the boring switch thing. The Birdo boss fight comes back as a even more clusterfuck of npc spam. It's easy tho bc if you stand in the middle the hammer brothers can't hit you. But the real thing is you don't get in there yet bc you need a key in section 1 but theres none yet. Oh yeah Birdo also just leaves the screen and is like "Yeah fuck you i leave this place on my own"
Turn: Damn thats a bad ghost house level you jump up some supposed to be stair like thing, get in the cave go to the right and win.
Okay let's be honest even if you tried making this as a joke episode it's more like a lazily made joke episode. In fact it doesn't even earn to be one bc it has the same errors as the first one.
Which leads to the CONCLUSION:
- Same Errors again
- No improved stuff really nothing
- Npc spamming
- No BGO again
- No Coins. In Blocks yes but the only npc coin ones were in Deja but thats about it.
- Bad bossfights bc Birdo can literally glitch out in the one and in the other one he just leaves by his own.
- Very short levels
- Lazy boring design
So in the end it doesn't deserve the title good episode or the title joke episode. It looks bad and you didn't improve on the design or anything else.
If you actually would try to make a good joke episode that would be a thing but this here doesn't deserve to be one tbh.
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Emral
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Postby Emral » Thu Jul 16, 2015 3:25 pm
Some criticism on the world map, based off your screens because I don't have the time to download anything right now:
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drmario1
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Postby drmario1 » Thu Jul 16, 2015 5:42 pm
SPOILER ALERT it's not done yet which is the main reason why it's not decortated
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Superiorstar
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Postby Superiorstar » Thu Jul 16, 2015 7:54 pm
You still need to take the criticism and stop avoiding it then.
these people are getting worse and worse as the time progresses, it's as if these people think it's steam greenlight page here
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Mable
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Postby Mable » Fri Jul 17, 2015 3:43 am
drmario1 wrote:SPOILER ALERT it's not done yet which is the main reason why it's not decortated
Stop avoiding it with silly excuses
Superiorstar wrote:You still need to take the criticism and stop avoiding it then.
these people are getting worse and worse as the time progresses, it's as if these people think it's steam greenlight page here
My eyes died from this post
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drmario1
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Postby drmario1 » Fri Jul 17, 2015 7:18 am
meh i'll add the decorations later
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Darkonius Mavakar
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Postby Darkonius Mavakar » Fri Jul 17, 2015 8:18 am
drmario1 wrote:meh i'll add the decorations later
How about you decide to be less obnoxious and you decide to follow criticism and the tips that Enjl kindly gave you?
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glitch4
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Postby glitch4 » Fri Jul 17, 2015 8:42 am
If he says the world map is not finished yet and will decorate it later, no need to tell him a lot to take critism.
drmario1 wrote:meh i'll add the decorations later
You also need to improve your post quality, since this one I quoted is pointless.
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AirSeus
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Postby AirSeus » Fri Jul 17, 2015 9:36 am
I used to be just like you drmario1, and I tell you, it didn't go well, take it from me, improve your rude behaviour otherwise you will go down the root that I did 3 to 4 years ago on knux's forums and on here.
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drmario1
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Postby drmario1 » Fri Jul 17, 2015 11:35 am
i don't mean to be rude i'm just bad at sorting criticism from trolling ( Case and point the troll malware comment i thought was criticism )
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