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I fixed my game just so you know

Ooooh, we have Mafia here? I may have to participate in the next game, I used to play this all the time!

Nickname wrote:Made a slight edit to my game (literally just one role), see my post. Dunno if it's worth approving again lol.

OK, I'll trust that it's minor enough to be good.

By the way, your games are approved now, Wizard of Off and Frozen Boo.

Pseudo-dino wrote:

Nickname wrote:Made a slight edit to my game (literally just one role), see my post. Dunno if it's worth approving again lol.

OK, I'll trust that it's minor enough to be good.

By the way, your games are approved now, Wizard of Off and Frozen Boo.

I realised that I fucked up legend-tony's role (it was a carbon copy og GhostHawk's instead of what I intended it to be (see why it is now)). So yeah he receives the sent PMs now instead of the received.

M?? - Mafia - Mafia in the city - Cardflip - Colour - Capacity - 20

This game is a special type of game. If realises on a regular mafia game but has a sort of twist. Everyone has money except third partys. With money you can buy lives - (If you have bought a life with money, you can survive a night kill, lynch etc.. you can only buy one in the whole game though.), a utility role, or you can give money to a person. If you are a utility role you can get one more role along with the tole you have. This is good for townies who have no utility role, with money they can get one utility role. Townie can get two utility roles, but those who had a utility role from the start can only get one more role with there original role. You get ten dollers everyday, and if you die with money, that money will be lost.

Things Money Can buy:
Life: Cost 50$
Robber: Cost 30$ - Town and mafia can buy this role - One a night you can choose a player to rob half of their money.
Vigilante, Doctor, Sheriff Roles: 50$ for one of these roles - Only Town can buy these roles
Second Lynching: Cost 50$ - Any can buy this - only can be bought one and will be announced that a second lynch has been bought had has been activated - both town and mafia can buy this only once.
Operator and Nightrider: Cost 40$ - Town can only butly this and can not get both. - Nightrider is immune to nightkills, and operator is immune to lynchs.
Inspection: Cost 40$ - You can inspect someone and this can only be bought once. If you are sheriff you can inspect 2 people.
Reveal: Cost 70$ Reveals a players role and color and can only be bought once. Does not work on demon. Can be bought for both mafia and town.
Hire: Cost 40$ - Can hire a player to due what they think is right. If they can only do this once. This also overrides there role use to someone else. Town can only buy this.
Roleblocker - Cost: 30$ - can block a player role use. Can obly be.bought.by.mafia.
Movie Producer: Cost 50$ - can choose there people to watch one of for movies. Star wars - no role can be used the next night for these 3 people. - Nightmare on Elm Street - The movie prodcer and those there people will die 2 days and two nights after watch this movie, because freddy kills them. - Free Wily - Can not talk the next day. - Minecraft - can use there role twice. These movies can only be viewed once. Can only be bought by town.
Color Randommizer: Cost 20$ Randomly Changes your color to any color - can be bought by both town and mafia once.








Mafia
Al Capone - A Mafia member and leader that can choose any color he/she wants that is in the game. Works with the Mafia to get rid of the town.
Painter - A Mafia member that can paint a person a colour that he/she choose for that person. Can only paint a person every other night. Can not paint fellow mafia members and can not paint him/her self. Works with the Mafia to get rid of the town.
Arsonist - Can burn a house of a player. If the selected player is visiting a different player or the Arsonist, then the house will be burned and announced out the the public, but no death will happen. If the demon is at the house then the house will not be burned and it will not be announced. Know who other mafia members are, and works with them to get rid of the town.
Mafioso - A Mafia member that takes out the orders of Mafia. Work with the Mafia to get rid of the town.


Town

Sheriff - A town that can learn the role of one person each night. Works with the town to lynch the Mafia off.
Deputy - A town who become the Sheriff when the Sheriff dies, and know who the Sheriff is. Works with the town to lynch off the and the Mafia.
Doctor - Can heal a player one night, and can only self heal once. Know the identity of the Trainee Doctor. Works with town to get rid of mafia.
Trainee Doctor - Can heal a player a night. Their is a 50/50 chance of that player dying if the trainee Nurse trys to heal them. Can never heal even if they become the new doctor. Can become the doctor if the doctor dies, and has contact with the doctor. Works with town to get rid of mafia.
Vigilante - A town who can kill a player each night but if he/she kills a town then the Vigilante must give his/hers role to a town and if the Vigilante dies then they must then their role will be given to a random town. Works with the town to get rid of the Mafia.
Townsperson - A town that has no special abilities. Works with the town to get rid of the Mafia.
Townsperson
Townsperson
Townsperson
Townsperson
Townsperson
Townsperson
Townsperson
Townsperson
Restaurant Owner - A townsperson. Cardflips Red. Does not know they are the Restaurant Owner.

Independent

Demon A side player who is immune to night kills, can kill a player each night, can not be painted or inspected, and can kill someone who got them lynched. Works alone to kill everyone.

IMPORTANT NOTES


- The Al Capone player must chose their colour at the start
- Mafia wins if the Demon is dead and the town has equal people as mafia people.
- Town wins if the Demon is dead and the Mafia are all dead.
- The painter can paint people the colors that are available in the game.
- If the Painter paints the Demon it will not work but the painter will not know that.
-Mafia members know who other Mafia members are.
- Those who are inactive for 4 days and nights ingame will be automatically killed or will be subbed in. (Depends)
- The Demon can die if they have been targeted twice but the people who target them will die though.
- The Demon will automatically die on the 6th day.
- The Painter can only paint every other night. (Example: paint night 1, paint night 3.)
- If the demon is inspected he will turn up blue if you were the Sheriff.



How is it? Tell me how it is.

FallingSnow wrote:Personally, I hate the money gimmick. It adds excessive depth.
The painter should either be allowed to paint every other night or only a certain amount of times.
Why is the demon's role given on the 4th day? That's dumb.

Pseudo-dino wrote: I'm not a huge fan of the money gimmick either.
However, I'll approve since the game seems relatively balanced.

Yeah, I'll probably remove the triforce gimmick. Now that I look at it more closely, it seems weird and makes it OP.

I'll do it tomorrow.

Added a role description for the roles I felt like having to further elaborate on in italics. I don't really get whatjyou mean by the spaces between roles and the large text though.

Edited my game based on feedback given.

my game was updated

Took out the triforce gimmick (I liked it at first, but then realized that it was kinda weird and complex). Also, buffed Ganondorf's ability to where he's immune to night kills.

FallingSnow, it tells you if you read what Bowser Jr. takes from Bowser.

Also Kamek's is permanent. So it's like two kills per night.

Mystogan wrote:FallingSnow, it tells you if you read what Bowser Jr. takes from Bowser.

Mystogan wrote:Takes over Bowser's ability if Bowser is KO'd.

So then what the heck is Bowser's ability? Like I said the first time, this is unclear to me and potential players because it's written in the "Notes" section below instead of next to Bowser Jr.

Also Kamek's is permanent. So it's like two kills per night.

Also unclear. How am I supposed to know what "turning into a brick" does? The description is arbitrary. It could be implied from your "Notes," but that would just likely leave people confused.

Nickname wrote:Added a role description for the roles I felt like having to further elaborate on in italics.

Tha'ts good.

I don't really get whatjyou mean by the spaces between roles and the large text though.

It's hard to read a list for example:

First item

Second item

Third item

Fourth item

Especially for example when
Each item has a subpoint

And the following item as well
With a subpoint
Or Two

And Then you continue the List

And all the text is the same size

Like are any of these subpoints of anything

Next
Maybe
Who knows
It's hard to read in my opinion

My point is to use a larger font size for the group headings so they don't look like player roles given the way that you spaced things with blank lines in-between them.

FallingSnow wrote:

Mystogan wrote:FallingSnow, it tells you if you read what Bowser Jr. takes from Bowser.

Mystogan wrote:Takes over Bowser's ability if Bowser is KO'd.

So then what the heck is Bowser's ability? Like I said the first time, this is unclear to me and potential players because it's written in the "Notes" section below instead of next to Bowser Jr.

Also Kamek's is permanent. So it's like two kills per night.

Also unclear. How am I supposed to know what "turning into a brick" does? The description is arbitrary. It could be implied from your "Notes," but that would just likely leave people confused.

People aren't as dumb as you're making them out to be. It could just be your interpretation because I understand it, and the notes are there to be read. I'm pretty sure everyone else would as well.

Is that all I have to fix? I dont see a problem with it, really.

Made stuff easier to read now.

I fixed most of the game I didin't want to make it roleflip because there would be no reason for the funeral priest soldier ect

Mystogan wrote:People aren't as dumb as you're making them out to be. It could just be your interpretation because I understand it, and the notes are there to be read. I'm pretty sure everyone else would as well.

Is that all I have to fix? I dont see a problem with it, really.

Actually, to be perfectly honest with you, I didn't understand the abilities either because they're unclear, so.

I hope my game is fixed completely and i hope it is approved.
Also Mystogan, i see some of the roles unclear as well... at the beginning, it just takes some timeto understand.

Fair enough. Tell me what needs to be made more clear? I'm not understanding what's wrong. Is it just the two roles?

Is a KO equal to death?

Zeldamaster12 wrote:Is a KO equal to death?

Yes.