Massive Lava

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Massive Lava

Postby KateBulka » Fri Nov 07, 2014 1:51 am

i make new level. Enjoy!
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Re: Massive Lava

Postby PROX » Fri Nov 07, 2014 2:57 am

Prox's unofficial review:
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An impossible lava level filled with incredibly low lava jumps that are impossible to jump across with a few switch activators

Design: This level was very poorly designed, it's obvious that you didn't playtest this at all. The 1st lava jump that you come across is 2 blocks high with a lava ceiling which makes it impossible to jump across. I literally had to edit your level just to make it past that part. Also the part after the skull rafts was pretty unforgiving since the only way you can go back is to get the leaf. (which was in an invisible block BTW so no one would be able to figure out how to make it past the lava) Also if someone loses the leaf, he or she won't be able make it back to the area leading to the star, which basically causes the player to get stuck. You should add some blue switch blocks on the skull raft part, so the player can navigate across without worrying about losing the leaf. Also the growing piranha vine was an invisible block which normally wouldn't be so bad, except the vine leads to the 3rd switch that you're supposed to activate. Also the vine had some cutoff at the top since the piranha plant stops on a slanted block which causes cutoff. The only thing good about the design is that there was no clash and the switch idea was creative. Also the level was waaay too short.
Score: 1/10

NPC Placement: The NPC placement was fine. I don't have any complaints about that.
10/10

Atmosphere: The level looked great. I think the music choice could have been better though.
6/10

Overall Score: 5.6/10 Average
This level needs A LOT of work
Last edited by TLtimelord on Fri Nov 07, 2014 9:54 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Reason: Forgot to do this. Review Approved.

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Re: Massive Lava

Postby KateBulka » Fri Nov 07, 2014 3:17 am

WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT DESIGN?! also now i sad
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Re: Massive Lava

Postby Zeldamaster12 » Fri Nov 07, 2014 8:53 am

You should probably test your levels to make sure that they're possible.

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Re: Massive Lava

Postby KateBulka » Fri Nov 07, 2014 9:32 am

i test. how not weird its easy for me.

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Re: Massive Lava

Postby PROX » Fri Nov 07, 2014 2:53 pm

Did you play test in God mode? Cuz the 1st lava jump was 2 blocks high and there was a lava ceiling. How did you manage to jump through that? I tried crouch jumping, light jumping, light spin jumping and none of that worked.
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Re: Massive Lava

Postby TLtimelord » Fri Nov 07, 2014 6:31 pm

MyNameIsEric52 wrote:WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT DESIGN?! also now i sad
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He gave you constructive criticism. By putting your level in the levels section, you subject yourself to any type of criticism, so I suggest you handle it maturely, please.


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