Run to the Airship

[Destroyer333]

This is my first level! It's pretty short, but I'm looking for tips to improve.

Download link: https://www.dropbox.com/s/yxb3rttxsdwip ... 281%29.rar
[Download Link edited to .rar]

[silent_]

I recommend you fix the screenshots. If you want to know a good image hosting website, try Postimage.org.

[bossedit8]

Fixed Screenshot:

Spoiler: show

Looks good so far. Maybe I am gonna play that Level but let's see.

[Warlock]

It would be nice if you could stick the .lvl file into a ZIP folder. That would make it easier to extract into the worlds folder.

But the level looks nice anyway.

Can't Wait to play this.

[Imaynotbehere4long]

Wow, this was a really short, really easy level. In fact, it's so short, it feels unfinished. Heck, the level is beaten by entering a warp pipe rather than collecting any of the usual level ending NPCs! What little level design the level had felt like it was just sorta there. Maybe you could have let the player explore inside the titular airship, or maybe you could have added some sort of time limit to justify the "run" part of the title. I don't really know what to say; it just needs...more. 4.5/10