Bumpties Castle

[crusher169]

well this obviously is a castle level that I made. I don't what to spoil too much so im gonna upload 1 screenshot only. this level isn't really long since I'm quite new to making levels. soon I will get into longer levels but this being my second level is an improvement on my first level
screenshots:

Spoiler: show

download link: https://www.mediafire.com/?dhjovacoee4fn3j

[KateBulka]

Review :

This half joke level, but this level... not joke level...
Graphics:
Yoshi's Island... YOSHI'S ISLAND! this not in Super Mario Bros. 3 (SMB3) Recolor 2.4/10
design:
hmm...... this not bad... not bad... This not good, but this not bad 4.1/10
Other:
This level real half joke level but this not bad level!
3.4/10 - average

[crusher169]

I don't understand what you meant at parts of that "review"

This half joke level, but this level... not joke level... (I don't get that part)
Yoshi's Island... YOSHI'S ISLAND! this not in Super Mario Bros. 3 (I don't get that)

[Navi]

Can't understand anything of this review.
(is there a bumpty boss here? )
I see something at the corners of the block in the screenshot

[Mable]

Review :

This half joke level, but this level... not joke level...
Graphics:
Yoshi's Island... YOSHI'S ISLAND! this not in Super Mario Bros. 3 (SMB3) Recolor :cry: :cry: 2.4/10
design:
hmm...... this not bad... not bad... This not good, but this not bad :? :roll: 4.1/10
Other:
This level real half joke level but this not bad level!
3.4/10 - average

Okay i played the level now so i can say something about this.

1. The level is not even half a joke level there is nothing which even makes it one. Or whatever you mean.
2. The level looks like it's supposed to be in YI Style the playable character also fits into it so theres no need for the smb3 stuff and you already once gave a tiny rating because you hate smw also(this was on some other level)
3. What in the fuck does this "this not bad" not bad "This not good" but this not bad
4. This level is not a joke level the creator would have mention it but he said he only got into level making which makes the level short and he will make longer levels soon.

You seriously should improve your review skills and i think zlakerboy357 already said your reviews are unconstructive.

[Ragunne]

Review :

This half joke level, but this level... not joke level...
Graphics:
Yoshi's Island... YOSHI'S ISLAND! this not in Super Mario Bros. 3 (SMB3) Recolor 2.4/10
design:
hmm...... this not bad... not bad... This not good, but this not bad 4.1/10
Other:
This level real half joke level but this not bad level!
3.4/10 - average

SMB3 is not the unique game of the Mario franchise .
Your unconstructive reviews are ridiculous.

[zlaker]

Review :

This half joke level, but this level... not joke level...
Graphics:
Yoshi's Island... YOSHI'S ISLAND! this not in Super Mario Bros. 3 (SMB3) Recolor :cry: :cry: 2.4/10
design:
hmm...... this not bad... not ... This not good, but this not bad :? :roll: 4.1/10
Other:
This level real half joke level but this not bad level!
3.4/10 - average

Make your reviews constructive. They're ridiculous and don't make sense.
crusher169: I'll play the level later today and review it.

[zlaker]

Bumpties Castle by crusher169

Atmosphere: 6/10: So this level was mainly Yoshi’s Island styled and I think the theme ya used didn’t fit. Since it was Yoshi’s Island styled I really think you should use Yoshi’s Island music. The GFXs like the tileset and the BGOs was really badly used especially the pipes I really feel it should be improved. The NPCs was okay, but the tileset and the BGOs was really lacking.

NPC Placement: 7/10: Honestly it was okay in the start, but then it became a bit spammy then later on when you arrived on the top part in section 1. It was really spammy so I really suggest clearing some enemies. Otherwise it was okay.

Gameplay: 4/10: There was so much you could do with the gameplay in this level, such as adding the Flowers from YI or other gameplay mechanics. YI had some great gameplay elements which you could’ve used. The boss was okay, but it wasn’t original or innovated so I wouldn’t give ya points for it honestly.

Level Design: 4/10: The levels’ first section was okay, but not exactly that fun. The level was basically a switch based level. The only thing I liked was the pipe thing in the second where you had to choose between pipes. It was a nice addition, but not the greatest idea. Like other YI games you could’ve added other puzzles like in those games.

So overall you’re getting a 5/10 on this level. This was quite different than other levels I’ve reviewed. If you fix the stuff I mentioned some judge will probably review it.