I played through this just now on TheXTech. Perfectly pleasant minisode, comparable in size and scope to The Snow Adventure (
viewtopic.php?p=403741). A very nice way to spend 20 minutes. I think it'd be great if you could tidy it up a bit and share a "completed" version, using just the levels you already have! I don't think the amount of work would be very large at all.
Some minor issues:
* The filesize is much too large, due to the music being large MP3 and WAV (!!!) files. If you're willing to restrict to TheXTech and X2, you should definitely switch to SPCs -- it seems like all of these should be available from the SMWcentral repository? If not, at least convert the WAVs to MP3s, and shorten some of them a bit (Track002.mp3 includes multiple loops, for instance).
* The text in the 1-T said "pick one" but there was no difference between the two items and the player(s) could take both.
* There was one row of above the water in the top-right of the map.
And some notes of personal taste:
* The key and keyhole in the path to 1-T should have been further apart, and the item used to reach them was too easy to acquire.
* The bonus in 1-T was a bit anticlimactic. Maybe you could make the leaf appear exclusively in 1-T.
* The brick at the beginning of the autoscroll level was empty. I expected it to produce a bonus when hit with the leaf.
* The path to the last A coin in the water level looked to me like it should have been a side path rather than an exit.
* The first room in 1-5 could be trivially cleared using the leaf. (Maybe not such a problem if the leaf became exclusive to 1-T.)
* The starting level could be bulked up a bit, the ending fight could be made harder (perhaps by adding obstacles to the arena), and an ending scene should be added.
* Add copies of the hardcoded graphics with TheXTech's filenames -- I can list these if you decide to do so.
