Time Race

Trace · Postby **Trace** » Thu Jun 19, 2014 2:46 pm

in this level you must press a time switch and jump to the end.

Spoiler: show

i hope you like it!

download: http://www.sendspace.com/file/f6m6dy

RudeGuy · Postby **RudeGuy** » Thu Jun 19, 2014 3:00 pm

Whoa, the gimnick here is fantastic, though you can't play the level with Peach or Toad...
Also, there's a bit of lack of BGOs.

FanofSMBX · Postby **FanofSMBX** » Thu Jun 19, 2014 3:01 pm

Christian07 wrote:Whoa, the gimnick here is fantastic, though you can't play the level with Peach or Toad...
Also, there's a bit of lack of BGOs.

Toad can spin jump?

YouTube · Postby **bossedit8** » Thu Jun 19, 2014 3:05 pm

Christian07 wrote:You can't play the level with Peach or Toad...

You mean, Peach and Link, not Peach and Toad because Toad can Spinjump in SMBX.

Christian07 wrote:There's a bit of lack of BGOs.

This isn't all that necessary in my opinion especially in SMB.

FanofSMBX wrote:Toad can spin jump?

Probably he didn't know this until right now.

This level is interesting by the way. Maybe I am gonna try it out.

RudeGuy · Postby **RudeGuy** » Thu Jun 19, 2014 3:09 pm

FanofSMBX wrote:
Christian07 wrote:Whoa, the gimnick here is fantastic, though you can't play the level with Peach or Toad...
Also, there's a bit of lack of BGOs.
Toad can spin jump?

Yes, but at the end there are yoshis. Also I knew that Toad can spinjump.

bossedit8 wrote:
Christian07 wrote:You can't play the level with Peach or Toad...
You mean, Peach and Link, not Peach and Toad because Toad can Spinjump in SMBX.

Watch what I wrote to FanofSMBX. Also, I wanted to say that the level is unplayable with Link too.

Trace · Postby **Trace** » Thu Jun 19, 2014 3:15 pm

wow

i posted it on valtteri forum and the first reply was 1 week after posting. but now 3 replys on the first hour AND someone that ive subscribed says that he maybe try it. i think i will love this place

YouTube · Postby **bossedit8** » Thu Jun 19, 2014 3:58 pm

Trace42 wrote:wow :o i posted it on valtteri forum and the first reply was 1 week after posting. but now 3 replys on the first hour AND someone that ive subscribed says that he maybe try it. i think i will love this place :o

Yeah, that's pretty surprising, isn't it? Also, I am going to record this level and then upload a video of this so you can see how I played on your creation. You will see.

Edit: Did it:

Original Link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NlhfUHKlVxY

@Christian07: It is possible with Toad. B)

Postby **Kley** » Thu Jun 19, 2014 7:08 pm

Design- Badly done. Sorry. I get that you were aiming for a unique challenge, but the level just wasn't very pleasant at all, other than the slightly unique time challenge . . .

Scenery- None at all. This level literally had no scenery. You need to add scenery to make a level fun to look at for the most part.

Replay Value- I wouldn't ever play this level again because it was so short, and nothing really stood out to me in this level...

Misc- Many NPCs were just spammed. This level has the potential to be amazing, but you just executed badly. No offense.

Score: 1/10

Moved to Trash Can.

You need to work on design, gimmick, and scenic value, and more non-linearity for a level to get a better score.

Trace · Postby **Trace** » Fri Jun 20, 2014 1:31 am

shut up thats my first completed level and there are no fit sceneries! and im not the best designer ***

RudeGuy · Postby **RudeGuy** » Fri Jun 20, 2014 4:35 am

Trace42 wrote:shut up thats my first completed level and there are no fit sceneries! and im not the best designer ***

First, there are sceneries that fits. And second, accept the criticism.

Mable · Postby **Mable** » Fri Jun 20, 2014 1:33 pm

Trace42 wrote:shut up thats my first completed level and there are no fit sceneries! and im not the best designer ***

Uhm you do realize he only does he job + this could get you a warning as Kley is one of the staffs so yeah.

Also even when they rated it bad you should look at this

http://www.smbxgame.com/forums/v ... f=32&t=739

this

Topic Replying Rules

9. Accept constructive criticism. There have been cases in which a level creator has had a poke at a level judge after reading their review. The level judges were specially picked by the administrators for their knowledge of what a good level is. Do not say something like "FFFFFUUUUCCCKKK YOU GUYS I HATE YOU ALL!!!!!1" or use an excuse such as "i put a star here because it is well hidden" to keep the level as is after a level judge points something out that should be improved. There are exceptions to this, but if a level judge points out something wrong, then just go and fix it yourself. Don't go and rant about it.

9a. Do not get upset if your level gets placed in the wrong section. It might have happened in the days of the original SMBX forums, and it is possible that it can happen here under this system - but sometimes people get upset if their level ends up in the section they didn't expect their level to land in. If this is the case, go and fix the flaws yourself. Ranting will get you nowhere. If you do so, your level will probably end up in the section you expected it to be in, and if you rant, your topic will get locked.

We hope you have a good time in the forum's level section.

And you always should add some background objects because those are a must have in a level there is no level without bgo expect it's a joke level they always lazily designed.

Flame me for this but if you can't accept it don't respond.

RoundPiplup · Postby **RoundPiplup** » Fri Jun 20, 2014 3:01 pm

Trace42 wrote:shut up thats my first completed level and there are no fit sceneries! and im not the best designer ***

Why not make an platform level? Its nice to play an platform level and discover whats inside those levels.

Postby **Kley** » Fri Jun 20, 2014 4:15 pm

Trace42 wrote:shut up thats my first completed level and there are no fit sceneries! and im not the best designer ***

I'll let you off with a verbal warning this time since you're new and it's your first offense, but if it happens again, you'll receive a system warning.