Super mario bros, Adventure islands!

[Umj1124]

Hello! this is my first post so I am sorry if this is bad. Anyways I am working on a project called 'Super Mario, Adventure islands' so here is a few things to know. 8 worlds with 3 bonus worlds and one secret world so 12 worlds! idk how to take screenshots but here are the names of every world. World 1. green grasslands. World 2. Orange desert. World 3. White ice. World 4. Blue beach. World 5. Dark green trees. World 6 Gray mountains. World 7 Puffy clouds. World 8. Red-hot Lava-land. Word A. Mushroom Sky's. World B. Icky swamp. World C. Black space ONCE AGAIN SORRY FOR NO PICS BUT MAYBE NEXT TIME! if you like my idea let me know. Anyways, Goodbye!

[Suckerman7 GM]

Hello! this is my first post so I am sorry if this is bad. Anyways I am working on a project called 'Super Mario, Adventure islands' so here is a few things to know. 8 worlds with 3 bonus worlds and one secret world so 12 worlds! idk how to take screenshots but here are the names of every world. World 1. green grasslands. World 2. Orange desert. World 3. White ice. World 4. Blue beach. World 5. Dark green trees. World 6 Gray mountains. World 7 Puffy clouds. World 8. Red-hot Lava-land. Word A. Mushroom Sky's. World B. Icky swamp. World C. Black space ONCE AGAIN SORRY FOR NO PICS BUT MAYBE NEXT TIME! if you like my idea let me know. Anyways, Goodbye!

When you post a project thread, make sure to have screenshots of your work at least. Because just writing concepts of your work aren't enough.

EDIT: I made a mistake before checking out the new rules. Sorry.

[FireyPaperMario]

When you post a project thread, make sure to have screenshots of your work at least. Because just writing concepts of your work aren't enough.

Writing concepts for SMBX projects are allowed, :\

[Suckerman7 GM]

When you post a project thread, make sure to have screenshots of your work at least. Because just writing concepts of your work aren't enough.

Writing concepts for SMBX projects are allowed, :\

Enjl talked to me about it. I didn't know this is now allowed. Not being in the forums for a long time makes you think not much changed about rules.

[Umj1124]

Here are a few pics I got from my game







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Sorry for the typo in the title!

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And now there is 4 bonus world so 13 worlds!

[Umj1124]

This one is from 1-5

This one is from 1-Tower
This one is from E-1

And one from 1-4

PLEASE GIVE FEEDBACK!
Anyways, im working on 1-4 as of the time im making this post. so.. yea

[Umj1124]

So in full, 4/108 levels done, lmao so around 3% done

[Cedur]

Hard to give feedbacks from single screenshots ... looks decent?

[SergioZen25]

Yeah, showing a bit more of each level could help give better feedback about them, but I can at least say my opinion on each one.

-The GameBoy level looks cool, although the graphics look a bit messy.
-The castle level looks a bit weird, are the pipes being hold by the chains? Maybe you could try creating a chain that looks like it could hold the pipes better, like a vertical or horizontal one.
-The space level doesn't show much, but the tiling doesn't match very well, one part of the ground is a different colour than the other one.
-The last one seems a little better, but the semisolid where the koopas and goombas are walking seems too dark, like its a background element instead of terrain you can walk on.

I would say that the screenshots look decent though.

[Umj1124]

Yeah, showing a bit more of each level could help give better feedback about them, but I can at least say my opinion on each one.

-The GameBoy level looks cool, although the graphics look a bit messy.
-The castle level looks a bit weird, are the pipes being hold by the chains? Maybe you could try creating a chain that looks like it could hold the pipes better, like a vertical or horizontal one.
-The space level doesn't show much, but the tiling doesn't match very well, one part of the ground is a different colour than the other one.
-The last one seems a little better, but the semisolid where the koopas and goombas are walking seems too dark, like its a background element instead of terrain you can walk on.

I would say that the screenshots look decent though.

The Gameboy is built in to Smbx 2, in the level settings, the castle chains i can fix the space on was just trying to show all three tilesets but ok, and the last on is The only one I am not changing

[Umj1124]

SOOOOOOOoooo today i have more pics, lets just jump Riiiiight in to it! PICS FROM 1-1...




PICS FROM 1-2


PICS FROM 1-3



Pics from 1-Tower




ALMOST DONE! pics from 1-4

OOOOOOk give feedback on what you think (Mainly if you think it looks bad or needs change) Anyways

[TheGameyFireBro105]

Joe Biden's airship?

[Umj1124]

I HAVE A VIDEO OF THE FIRST FEW LEVELS! but how do I show Yall without Youtube?

[ElectriKong]

Please keep all posts about your project in one topic.

[SuperMarioGrava]

Joe Biden's airship?

Lmao

[SergioZen25]

Some of those last screenshots doesn't look that bad, but I would advise not mixing many styles, some of the sprites tend to clash.

[krakin]

Joe Biden's airship?

Lmao

Guess this episode is supposed to be a joke or something

[Umj1124]

Joe Biden's airship?

Lmao

Guess this episode is supposed to be a joke or something

god I put in one joke, it has to have a little fun here and there, ill take it out

[Sonya Sanchez]

Political jokes IMO don’t belong in a Mario game, you can have jokes in it but not once that involve politic or political people.

[Lucario]

Could you use my level (Piranha Jungle, on the level forums) for the World 5? It is forest-themed and have a lot Piranha Plants, and has some difficulty! It could be a 5-5, 5-6 or 5-A (A = Secret Level 1 or something - Example: 1-A, 2-B, 5-A, 5-B: those levels can unlock shortcuts and top secret areas, and even switches! but they need to be unlocked by a normal level first)