No name yet, but I need feedback.

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Velsity
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No name yet, but I need feedback.

Postby Velsity » Tue Apr 16, 2019 5:18 am

Hello, thank you for choosing my on going project. It means alot. Anyways, here are the screenshots:
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Any feedback is welcome, but please, explain why you took the decision to say how it is. So I can hopefully improve and/or fix it.

MegaDood
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Re: No name yet, but I need feedback.

Postby MegaDood » Tue Apr 16, 2019 8:04 am

I like how it looks like a traditional style Mario game. I'm honestly not sure what to recommend or say about it, it looks pretty good, except perhaps the pipes and piranha plants clash with the rest of the level in the third screenshot a bit.

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Re: No name yet, but I need feedback.

Postby Saltlord » Tue Apr 16, 2019 9:19 am

You might wanna add some BGOs to the cave and the castle, they still look a little empty as they are. Other than that, I can't give you much in terms of feedback.

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Re: No name yet, but I need feedback.

Postby TheNightingale » Tue Apr 16, 2019 9:32 am

The screenshots look very promising so far. You may add a bit more scenery though

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Re: No name yet, but I need feedback.

Postby MegaDood » Thu Apr 18, 2019 12:04 am

Also you might want to add a few more coins here and there. I don't know if that's a thing all throughout the level or not but that's just from what I can see.

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Re: No name yet, but I need feedback.

Postby Eri7 » Thu Apr 18, 2019 5:11 am

IMO you can put a bit more coins in the 2nd and 3rd screenshot as they are lacking some.


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