Peach's Great Revenge

Palwanda · Postby **Palwanda** » Fri Nov 02, 2018 9:31 am

Hello, this is my new episode called "Peach's Great Revenge". In this episode Peach is the main character and takes revenge on Bowser.
It is a rather small episode with "only" 6 worlds because I just wanted to experiment with this concept and I also wanted to see how it is perceived by other people.

Plot:

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Screenshots:

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Worlds:

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download:

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a playthrough of world 1:

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Jerrysmbxworld · Postby **Jerrysmbxworld** » Sat Nov 03, 2018 5:18 pm

Your creativity & enthusiasm never fails to surprise Me. Your on You're 3rd SMBX Episode while, I'm currently on a full reset.

Palwanda · Postby **Palwanda** » Sat Nov 03, 2018 5:57 pm

Jerrysmbxworld wrote: ↑
Sat Nov 03, 2018 5:18 pm
Your creativity & enthusiasm never fails to surprise Me. Your on You're 3rd SMBX Episode while, I'm currently on a full reset.

Thank you! I guess I have to much freetime

Sorry to hear that you have to start your episode over again

joelcanciones · Postby **joelcanciones** » Sun Nov 04, 2018 1:31 am

Hi: Im liking your episode so far but I found a problem. Please could you help me with the part after the checkpoint in level 2-4? No matter how hard I try I cannot reach the high bridge platform even with the propeller and running at full speed and couldn't fin an nvisible coin block if there is one. Also, cold you tell me please whih other episodes hve you made? Thanks!!!

Palwanda · Postby **Palwanda** » Sun Nov 04, 2018 5:10 am

joelcanciones wrote: ↑
Sun Nov 04, 2018 1:31 am
Hi: Im liking your episode so far but I found a problem. Please could you help me with the part after the checkpoint in level 2-4? No matter how hard I try I cannot reach the high bridge platform even with the propeller and running at full speed and couldn't fin an nvisible coin block if there is one. Also, cold you tell me please whih other episodes hve you made? Thanks!!!

My other episodes are called "Super Pal Bros X" and "Super Pal Bros Returns".
After the checkpoint in 2-4 you have to be at full speed, jump in the right moment and then turn slightly left as you are jumping.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AbXAymNom4U in this video at about 9 minutes you can see what I mean.
I think that left turn is what you need to try.

joelcanciones · Postby **joelcanciones** » Sun Nov 04, 2018 9:40 am

I've just completed your episode. I really liked it but it felt a little rushed in my opinion. I have some sugestions that would make it better in my opinion:

-It would be good if you added more scenery to the world map in general. It looked a litle empty.

-The story is about peach saving some toads and you never get to watch any rescued toad. It would be a good Idea to make each boss to say something before each battle and after you defeat them make a key appear that unlocks a door that takes you where the captured toad is. Then you have tot alk with the toad, he says a thank you message and then the orb that ends the level appears. Maybe even bowser have them captured again the toad from the first 5 worlds and when you defeat him the locked door that is in the room where you fight Bowser takes you to where all six kidnapped toads are. And you could add a message from Bowser after you defeat the koopaling in world 6 telling you that he captured all 5 toads that you have alreadt rescued again.

Also, please could you tell me where does the song from 4-3 when you are outside originally comes from? I'ts really cool. Thanks in advance.

Palwanda · Postby **Palwanda** » Sun Nov 04, 2018 11:21 am

It's called "Shantae Labyrinth Remix"
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JbJFFtsQ9mw

Added in 24 minutes 12 seconds:

joelcanciones wrote: ↑
Sun Nov 04, 2018 9:40 am
I've just completed your episode. I really liked it but it felt a little rushed in my opinion. I have some sugestions that would make it better in my opinion:

-It would be good if you added more scenery to the world map in general. It looked a litle empty.

-The story is about peach saving some toads and you never get to watch any rescued toad. It would be a good Idea to make each boss to say something before each battle and after you defeat them make a key appear that unlocks a door that takes you where the captured toad is. Then you have tot alk with the toad, he says a thank you message and then the orb that ends the level appears. Maybe even bowser have them captured again the toad from the first 5 worlds and when you defeat him the locked door that is in the room where you fight Bowser takes you to where all six kidnapped toads are. And you could add a message from Bowser after you defeat the koopaling in world 6 telling you that he captured all 5 toads that you have alreadt rescued again.

Also, please could you tell me where does the song from 4-3 when you are outside originally comes from? I'ts really cool. Thanks in advance.

Thank you for your feedback