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Lila M-3210
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Super Mario Within

Postby Lila M-3210 » Thu May 24, 2018 3:13 pm

I have a Project. It is Super Mario Within. This is my first project, and I am nervous. I am required to make a post about it. But I do hope it is an okay start.

I have 10 worlds planned. Two secret worlds and 8 regular worlds. Each has 4 regular levels, but there are extra levels after each warp planned.

This Episode has no real story as of yet.



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Here is the demo:
https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/ ... Within.rar

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Re: Super Mario Within

Postby AlphaCPS » Thu May 24, 2018 3:17 pm

No need to be nervous! For a first project, it's pretty alright. I'll look forward to your project and, hopefully, I'll give some feedback if I can. Good luck~

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Re: Super Mario Within

Postby Devan2002 » Thu Aug 02, 2018 10:33 am

I may seem to be a level critic, but I'm not.

You should try to reshape the world map so it's not just a big rectangle, it's pretty bland when it's like that. Also, people might not like seeing a bunch of decorations clustered together (also, not sure if you're aware of this but if you place a path on a decoration, the decoration gets removed when you clear a level that reveals that path).

As for the levels, the level 19 seconds into the video needs some scenery; without them, levels look boring and can make you look lazy without them. The level 48 seconds into the video could use a remake, it's better to use the horizontal airship blocks instead of vertical ones at the top.

And in case this stresses you more, we're trying to help (so far it's me, but hopefully someone else can assist on any flaws and what could be considered to fix them).


Oh, and one last thing, so far, we only see what 2 of your worlds on your world map, since you have 8 worlds (though 2 extra ones that are secret), you'll want either screenshots of those 6 other worlds (if you don't have them made, you should make them right away).


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