Lava run (in hell)

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Lava run (in hell)

Postby KateBulka » Thu May 29, 2014 12:39 pm

MARIO RUN!!! RUN!!!
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Re: Lava run (in hell)

Postby Maruiki » Thu Jun 05, 2014 3:18 pm

[size=150][b][u]Level Review: Lava Run (in Hell)[/u][/b][/size]

[b][i][u]Summary:[/u][/i][/b] This level is pretty good. It wasn't absolutely amazing, but it's pretty good. First off, I have to ask, why is there a Toad box at the beginning? There's really no point of it. That I thought was kind of wierd, but anyways, let's move on. Next up, I want to go ahead and say that the lava that is following you looks wierd. In my opinion, to make it look better, you could make it fill up the entire left side. Next up, I like the red trees, but there's a lot of them and some of them are in really wierd places. You can at least remove some of them. Next up is the music. I think it's fantastic. It was really intense, and that's one reason why I really liked it. Next, I want to say that I like how you put leaf suits (like 2) around the level. The one at the start of the level is kind of wierd though in my opinion. Also, at this point in the level, you're almost always going to get hit by one of these Bullet Bills:
[spoiler][img]http://i.imgur.com/L4xhdwU.png[/img][/spoiler]
You should probably remove one of them. The Paratroopas can help you if you jump on them, but still, it's pretty hard.

Well, there isn't much more to say about this level because it's pretty short, but let's go ahead and move on to the graphics.


[b][i][u]Graphics:[/u][/i][/b] The only graphic I noticed was the Bullet Bill one. It's really nice. I don't know of what else to say really. And also, I believe you stated once on the IRC that you made them yourself. Nice work, Core.


[size=150][b][i][u]Level Score: 5.5[/u][/i][/b][/size]

[size=150][b][i]Level Status: [color=#00BF00]Average[/color][/i][/b][/size]

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Re: Lava run (in hell)

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