Start [I need some criticism!]

IcyBrd · Postby **IcyBrd** » Sun Jun 04, 2017 1:36 am

Please, give me some criticism for this level! I strive to be the best level designer that I can be, and criticism will make that possible.

Hello there! Being a new-ish level designer here, I have been working on my episode, known as Toad X-es Back. Since it is the beginning of my episode, I decided to release the first level of it.

The first picture:

Spoiler: show

NOTE: The gray blocks are disappearing blocks, like in Capcom's Megaman, and the loop of events that made them disappear/reappear are triggered by the block on the left

The second picture:

Spoiler: show

ONE LAST NOTE: The episode this level is planned to be in is not meant to be two player, as its only meant to be played as Toad.

DOWNLOAD LINK: https://www.dropbox.com/s/lvtam91mpccf6 ... t.lvl?dl=0

If you have any complains, ratings of it, please post it in the comments!

aero · Postby **aero** » Sun Jun 04, 2017 1:38 am

Where is the download?

IcyBrd · Postby **IcyBrd** » Sun Jun 04, 2017 1:38 am

Oh, whoops, I forgot the download link. Silly me!
https://www.dropbox.com/home?preview=Start.lvl

Postby **ElectriKong** » Sun Jun 04, 2017 2:51 am

Maybe put the download in the OP?

IcyBrd · Postby **IcyBrd** » Mon Jun 05, 2017 6:08 pm

Going to bump this thread so that I can actually get a review. Also, if you want a review, DM me on discord (same username) or post it here!

Doesntpostverymuch · Postby **Doesntpostverymuch** » Mon Jun 05, 2017 6:11 pm

Looks pretty good, but i wouldn't get past the disapearing blocks bit (because i suck)

TDK · Postby **TDK** » Tue Jun 06, 2017 9:24 am

IcyBrd wrote:Oh, whoops, I forgot the download link. Silly me!
https://www.dropbox.com/home?preview=Start.lvl

The download link doesn't work.
It says " Please sign in or register to access this page."

Doesntpostverymuch · Postby **Doesntpostverymuch** » Tue Jun 06, 2017 4:10 pm

he shoulda used media fire or file dropper.

Cedur · Postby **Cedur** » Tue Jun 06, 2017 4:12 pm

TheDinoKing wrote:
IcyBrd wrote:Oh, whoops, I forgot the download link. Silly me!
https://www.dropbox.com/home?preview=Start.lvl
The download link doesn't work.
It says " Please sign in or register to access this page."

If you have a Dropbox, this link is your very own homepage. Dropbox works but not like this.

Postby **Julia Pseudo** » Fri Jun 09, 2017 4:35 am

Please send a working download link to the staff to get this unlocked. Make sure you link the actual file download from Dropbox and not just the preview on your home page.

Edit: reopened