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the chaos world

Postby metawarior » Mon Oct 10, 2016 8:46 pm

this level is in the mushroom kingdom sea after bowser have conquer all the mushroom kingdom exept for an island (were mario is curenttly living) and a big part of the dream world have fuse with the mushroom kingdom's sea

dowload:
http://www.giv.com.co/meta/the%20chaos%20world.zip

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if someting don't work or you don't like someting of the level please tell me and i will corec it
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Re: the chaos world

Postby bossedit8 » Mon Oct 10, 2016 8:50 pm

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Re: the chaos world

Postby metawarior » Mon Oct 10, 2016 8:54 pm

bossedit8 wrote:Fixed Image:
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[img]http://i.imgur.com/4eNtGeM.jpg[/img]
thanks bossedit8 :mrgreen:

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Re: the chaos world

Postby PixelPest » Mon Oct 10, 2016 9:04 pm

That world map is a mess tbh. The amount of style-mixing, cut-off, and the overall design is very unappealing--it's poorly structured--try getting rid of the curved bridges all in a row, stick to just one style (SMB3 or SMW world map), don't clump BGOs together (like at tje bottom of the screen), make the landmasses more natural (not just a square), and just general have it make more sense (no fire flower or hills in the water, no world # signs all over the place, no lava and water touching, etc.)

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Re: the chaos world

Postby RhysOwens » Wed Oct 12, 2016 11:36 am

PixelPest wrote:That world map is a mess tbh. The amount of style-mixing, cut-off, and the overall design is very unappealing--it's poorly structured--try getting rid of the curved bridges all in a row, stick to just one style (SMB3 or SMW world map), don't clump BGOs together (like at tje bottom of the screen), make the landmasses more natural (not just a square), and just general have it make more sense (no fire flower or hills in the water, no world # signs all over the place, no lava and water touching, etc.)
I agree with you. I could make a better map than him.

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Re: the chaos world

Postby Danny » Thu Oct 13, 2016 10:24 pm

That scenery placement is extremely random and it doesn't look all that good. Plus, some of the level placement is bizarre as well. On top of that, is this an episode or a level? Because if it's a level, I'm pretty sure it wouldn't have a world map.

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Re: the chaos world

Postby metawarior » Thu Oct 13, 2016 10:30 pm

Syndrilevosse wrote:That scenery placement is extremely random and it doesn't look all that good. Plus, some of the level placement is bizarre as well. On top of that, is this an episode or a level? Because if it's a level, I'm pretty sure it wouldn't have a world map.
it is an episode i think because when i sumit the episode i think that the episodes were canon to the smbx histori and that the levels were the ones made by the people

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Re: the chaos world

Postby Amine Retro » Fri Oct 14, 2016 8:32 am

i will play your level/world and judge it later. (by editing this post)
edit 1: how am i supposed to play this,
without the level files?
edit 2: nice gfx.
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actually not.
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so you don't know how this works.
1. create a new MS paint file
2. copypaste the graphic to the new file
3. save
4. search for an image converter
5. use it to convert the png. into gif.
there are other simple ways but this is my way.

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Re: the chaos world

Postby Snessy the duck » Fri Oct 14, 2016 12:59 pm

metawarior wrote:
Syndrilevosse wrote:That scenery placement is extremely random and it doesn't look all that good. Plus, some of the level placement is bizarre as well. On top of that, is this an episode or a level? Because if it's a level, I'm pretty sure it wouldn't have a world map.
it is an episode i think because when i sumit the episode i think that the episodes were canon to the smbx histori and that the levels were the ones made by the people


But to be serious, Episodes contain multiple levels and usually have a world map or hub in them, while Levels are singular levels without a world map or hub!

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Re: the chaos world

Postby RhysOwens » Sat Oct 15, 2016 6:27 am

Why are you posting this topic here and not just in the Projects forum?

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Re: the chaos world

Postby metawarior » Sat Oct 15, 2016 12:44 pm

RhysOwens wrote:Why are you posting this topic here and not just in the Projects forum?
beuse it is ready and you can dowloa it

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Re: the chaos world

Postby Snessy the duck » Sat Oct 15, 2016 12:54 pm

metawarior wrote:
RhysOwens wrote:Why are you posting this topic here and not just in the Projects forum?
beuse it is ready and you can dowloa it
That has nothing to do with what he just said!

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Re: the chaos world

Postby TDK » Sat Oct 15, 2016 1:37 pm

Snessy the duck wrote:
metawarior wrote:
RhysOwens wrote:Why are you posting this topic here and not just in the Projects forum?
beuse it is ready and you can dowloa it
That has nothing to do with what he just said!
I think he meant that the episode is complete.
metawarior wrote: if someting don't work or you don't like someting of the level please tell me and i will corec it
I downloaded the episode, and all of the level are missing (there's only custom graphic folders).

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Re: the chaos world

Postby RhysOwens » Sat Oct 15, 2016 4:21 pm

TheDinoKing432 wrote:I downloaded the episode, and all of the level are missing (there's only custom graphic folders).
That has Project written all over it.

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Re: the chaos world

Postby Koopsakimoto » Sat Oct 15, 2016 10:44 pm

There aren't any levels in the folder.

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Re: the chaos world

Postby underFlo » Sun Oct 16, 2016 2:40 pm

There aren't enough screenshots for your project and the download link doesn't contain any levels. If this isn't finished yet, please provide more screenshots (see the rules for more information on that) and if it is in fact finished then fix your download link and PM a mod with it to get this unlocked.


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