The Mysterious Sewer

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The Mysterious Sewer

Postby crazybenjamin » Wed Dec 23, 2015 11:51 pm

Mario has been sent to investigate a mysterious sewer. What dangers await him down below?
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Re: The Mysterious Sewer

Postby Flumpty Bumpty » Sun Jan 03, 2016 12:39 pm

This looks fun! can't wait to try it out!

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Re: The Mysterious Sewer

Postby Castlemaster712 » Sat Feb 06, 2016 6:51 pm

I just played it, and I think that it's a bit short and easy, it also feels empty, there is no scenery and it's very open.
There are also some useless enemies and blocks (like before the checkpoint, why are those enemies and spikes there?) The music is nice though
The boss fight isn't that great, it's just a normal Mouser fight with a random spike block in between, you should've added maybe some enemies, conveyor belt or something to make it more original.
There is definitely room for improvement, I won't say it's bad, but it's not that good either.

Edit: Oh shit I bumped the post D:

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Re: The Mysterious Sewer

Postby PersonNamedUser » Sat Feb 06, 2016 9:02 pm

Castlemaster712 wrote:I just played it, and I think that it's a bit short and easy, it also feels empty, there is no scenery and it's very open.
There are also some useless enemies and blocks (like before the checkpoint, why are those enemies and spikes there?) The music is nice though
The boss fight isn't that great, it's just a normal Mouser fight with a random spike block in between, you should've added maybe some enemies, conveyor belt or something to make it more original.
There is definitely room for improvement, I won't say it's bad, but it's not that good either.

Edit: Oh shit I bumped the post D:
Umm, isn't this level in the casual levels section? This means they don't want criticism.

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Re: The Mysterious Sewer

Postby Castlemaster712 » Sat Feb 06, 2016 9:16 pm

MosaicMario wrote:Umm, isn't this level in the casual levels section? This means they don't want criticism.
DarkMatt wrote:When giving feedback to a thread, we only ask that you keep the author's feelings in mind.
DarkMatt wrote:It's okay to complain about how bad a level was, but you do NOT get to complain about an author not caring about what you say.
Well, I was just trying to give him some tips on making the level better, and some criticism is still allowed :p

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Re: The Mysterious Sewer

Postby DarkMatt » Wed Feb 10, 2016 10:45 pm

MosaicMario wrote:Umm, isn't this level in the casual levels section? This means they don't want criticism.
I may not moderate this forum anymore, but I can tell you right now:

This level being in Casual Levels does not imply the author does not want criticism. He cannot ban people giving him feedback, but this forum does protect against pushy or brazen reviewers. Casual Levels is meant to be all in fun, and giving feedback is not explicitly against fun, especially feedback like the one you quoted.


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