Another Mario World - 1-1 Demo

[Wkay]

This is the first level for my new episode called 'Another Mario World'. I'd release the world map along with the other levels, but making levels in SMBX is hard and takes time.
Here's the demo: http://www.mediafire.com/download/tle95 ... MW+1-1.zip
Screenshots:

Spoiler: show

Feel free to give feedback. Thanks!

[SecondScolipede]

Can you please post a screenshot of your level first?
EDIT: Thank you! I will leave some feedback later

[Zeldamaster12]

Can you please post a screenshot of your level first?
EDIT: Thank you! I will leave some feedback later

Don't backseat moderate. Use the report feature next time.

[SecondScolipede]

So this is a pretty nice little demo! Of course, it will need to be much longer in the final product. It feels rather empty though. (Although I guess this is the first level in the project so that is accepable)

[CopyLeft]

Barren with very few NPCs, along with an unneeded world map.

[glitch4]

Official short Review

This is definetly one of the blandest levels I've played. While I don't see nothing wrong with the graphics, there's a problem with the atmosphere, which is bad, since there's a few BGOs I've seen here decorated. The gameplay is boring and short, beating it under a minute. There's also lack of NPC placement, there's no coins placed at all in the whole level and there's not many emenies in the first section. I think the cave section should have something more than just a shell and a 1-up block, like coins, etc. At least the music fits good in there, but the level felt like it's made under 15 minutes.

Anyway, there's really nothing to say here, since this level is very short. My suggestion is make levels longer, put some effort into it, like decorating, making a good npc placement.

2/10