Super Luigi: The Marvelous Compass (Town level screenshots)

PaperMarioFan · Postby **PaperMarioFan** » Mon Nov 30, 2015 3:50 am

Hello everybody... i'am long time wanted make my episode about Luigi's dairys from my favorite game - Paper Mario 2... So there is some screenshots with my levels what i'am making now. I planning launch episode in december/november 2016... maybe short.

Screenshots i wil be posted every months... maybe 4 or 3 in month.
I say what i can't making "awesome scripts" i mean layers and events, but dialogues and "boss rewards" i can doing.
Story

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Screenshots

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Characters
Luigi and his partners
Bosses
World 1 - Shrooboid and Koopatrols
World 2 - Trycle (dragon from SMB2 i just forget his name, sorry)
World 3 - Wario bros
World 4 - Grubba
World 5 - King Whomp, king Bob-omb and Midbus
World 6 - Naval piranha
World 7 - Fawful
World 8 - Dimentio, Fawful and giant Midbus
World names
1 - New adventure
2 - Berry jungle
3 - Races
4 - Town and penthouses
5 - Casino
6 - Yoshi's island
7 - Fawful's factory
8 - Castle Fawful (change from castle Bleck

)
Progress
World 1 - 55%
World 2 - 0%
World 3 - 0%
World 4 - 10%
World 5 - 0%
World 6 - 2%
World 7 - 4%
World 8 - 2%
Help needed
Me need: 2 beta testers and maybe 3 level designers... no one more

Credits

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Sorry for my bad english, i'am from Russia

h2643 · Postby **h2643** » Mon Nov 30, 2015 6:58 am

I really don't like the spamfest in the first four screenshots, there is WAY too much stuff going at the moment. By removing some BGOs and NPCs it would look a bit better imo. This has potential, though.
о я не ожидал увидеть ещё кого то из россии : D

PaperMarioFan · Postby **PaperMarioFan** » Mon Nov 30, 2015 10:08 am

h2643 wrote:I really don't like the spamfest in the first four screenshots, there is WAY too much stuff going at the moment. By removing some BGOs and NPCs it would look a bit better imo. This has potential, though.
о я не ожидал увидеть ещё кого то из россии : D

What the hell? O_o there is no much npc's and backgrounds... but i still deleted if you say there is SO MUCH things

I don't understand... i mean if so much things in levels so he much beautiful?!
так я русский же здесь всегда же был =) тем более их тут ещё 3 включая тебя с брейнетом

RudeGuy · Postby **RudeGuy** » Mon Nov 30, 2015 10:53 am

PaperMarioFan wrote: What the hell? O_o there is no much npc's and backgrounds... but i still deleted if you say there is SO MUCH things I don't understand... i mean if so much things in levels so he much beautiful?!

There are like 1 BGO per block. This is going overboard with decorations, and it doesn't look good at all.
Anyway, the design here looks decent so far.

PaperMarioFan · Postby **PaperMarioFan** » Mon Nov 30, 2015 11:00 am

RudeGuy07 wrote:
PaperMarioFan wrote: What the hell? O_o there is no much npc's and backgrounds... but i still deleted if you say there is SO MUCH things I don't understand... i mean if so much things in levels so he much beautiful?!
There are like 1 BGO per block. This is going overboard with decorations, and it doesn't look good at all.
Anyway, the design here looks decent so far.

Thanks... but yes okey i fix this... but that's not so matter, if you now looking on progress

Mable · Postby **Mable** » Mon Nov 30, 2015 1:29 pm

I would suggest giving world 1 a better name instead of new adventure.

PaperMarioFan · Postby **PaperMarioFan** » Mon Nov 30, 2015 1:59 pm

Tinkerbell wrote:I would suggest giving world 1 a better name instead of new adventure.

Okay i stil thinking about new name.

PaperMarioFan · Postby **PaperMarioFan** » Thu Dec 03, 2015 4:18 am

2 new screenshots in first topic... i'v will be slowly add screens, buy world 1 making... ready 4 levels and intro... must be 7.

PaperMarioFan · Postby **PaperMarioFan** » Sun Dec 06, 2015 1:46 am

Town level screenshots add to main topic.

CopyLeft · Postby **CopyLeft** » Wed Dec 09, 2015 5:48 pm

So far, it doesn't look too bad. I can't say much due to there only being screenies, though.
New Adventure isn't that bad of a name, but it could be better. Here's a suggestion:

When going to the island, the plane crashes and you are in the world named Unknown Island, or perhaps Land of Dangerous Contingency? Not sure if I am any good at names or not. =P

Anyway, looks fun!

PaperMarioFan · Postby **PaperMarioFan** » Thu Dec 10, 2015 1:33 am

EpicMarioBro wrote:So far, it doesn't look too bad. I can't say much due to there only being screenies, though.
New Adventure isn't that bad of a name, but it could be better. Here's a suggestion:

When going to the island, the plane crashes and you are in the world named Unknown Island, or perhaps Land of Dangerous Contingency? Not sure if I am any good at names or not. =P

Anyway, looks fun!

Thanks for review))) I know what new adventure bad name i still think about new name)))