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[PersonNamedUser]

THIS IS USELESS ANYWAY SO THIS IS REMOVED.

[Emral]

You missed the opportunity to call the Hoopster "Hiipster".

[PROX]

I think the blue is too strong on the pokey, everything else looks nice though

[Rawr]

Good job on the characters, although I must agree that the Pokey's blue is kinda.. unfitting. Maybe change it around.


(Hah, he's a Prick. Get it?.. No?..)

[underFlo]

I'm sure you'll find a use for my characters!

Why would anyone use your OCs in his project? If I were to use OCs in my project, I wouldn't just take them from others and certainly make them more than mere recolors.

[FanofSMBX]

I'm sure you'll find a use for my characters!

Why would anyone use your OCs in his project? If I were to use OCs in my project, I wouldn't just take them from others and certainly make them more than mere recolors.

All of them have new eye colors and some have clothes or patterns.

[PersonNamedUser]

I'm sure you'll find a use for my characters!

Why would anyone use your OCs in his project? If I were to use OCs in my project, I wouldn't just take them from others and certainly make them more than mere recolors.

FanOfSMBX Is right they all have new stuff besides recolors.
Like Hoops is Wearing 3D Glasses.

[underFlo]

I'm sure you'll find a use for my characters!

Why would anyone use your OCs in his project? If I were to use OCs in my project, I wouldn't just take them from others and certainly make them more than mere recolors.

All of them have new eye colors and some have clothes or patterns.

Oh I'm sorry I missed such a crucial detail as eye color. That totally changes everything.

As for the clothes/accessories, the few that do have those seem uninspired and kinda random tbh. Why would a Hoopster wear 3D glasses? I doubt those'd be of any use for most episodes. Also, I still think that just using someone else's OCs (Original Characters) is kinda poor, regardless of their quality. If you wanna use OCs, be creative and make your own.

[PersonNamedUser]

The Reason I did this is something to differentiate them from their original species and it's not uninspiring.
And the thing you said about why use someone elses OC's? Your kind of right. I just wanted to see what people said.
Also I plan to use most(If not all of them) in my Episode Toad's SMB Adventure.

[underFlo]

The Reason I did this is something to differentiate them from their original species and it's not uninspiring.
And the thing you said about why use someone elses OC's? Your kind of right. I just wanted to see what people said.
Also I plan to use most(If not all of them) in my Episode Toad's SMB Adventure.

Thing is: A Hoopster wearing 3D glasses is really hard to make sense of. Let's look at the Paper Mario series, because that's one of the few official games with enemies as NPCs. A lot of those NPCs wear either something that makes some sort of sense to wear normally (like hats and whatnot) or their design makes sense with their backstory (see: Goombella). I don't really see how you wanna justify 3D glasses on a Hoopster, as an example Goombella's design is explained by her being a history student, Parakarry's kinda makes him look like a pilot which is also fitting etc. If you look at a Hoopster with 3D glasses, it's hard to deduce anything from that. The best design is probably the Rex because it'd make sense if his character is football-centered, however, just having a recolored enemy is not creative, especially if the colors are so bright. Choose less subtle colors, like a more brown-ish Pokey, for example. Most of the current colors aren't really pleasant to look at and don't fit with their environments.

[FanofSMBX]

You could make these into SM64 pictures by adding frames!

[PersonNamedUser]

The Reason I did this is something to differentiate them from their original species and it's not uninspiring.
And the thing you said about why use someone elses OC's? Your kind of right. I just wanted to see what people said.
Also I plan to use most(If not all of them) in my Episode Toad's SMB Adventure.

Thing is: A Hoopster wearing 3D glasses is really hard to make sense of. Let's look at the Paper Mario series, because that's one of the few official games with enemies as NPCs. A lot of those NPCs wear either something that makes some sort of sense to wear normally (like hats and whatnot) or their design makes sense with their backstory (see: Goombella). I don't really see how you wanna justify 3D glasses on a Hoopster, as an example Goombella's design is explained by her being a history student, Parakarry's kinda makes him look like a pilot which is also fitting etc. If you look at a Hoopster with 3D glasses, it's hard to deduce anything from that. The best design is probably the Rex because it'd make sense if his character is football-centered, however, just having a recolored enemy is not creative, especially if the colors are so bright. Choose less subtle colors, like a more brown-ish Pokey, for example. Most of the current colors aren't really pleasant to look at and don't fit with their environments.

You should Stop being rude about this because. Your making me a little upset that your saying this about my characters. Most of the Accessories make sense though.
Striker is Sported-Based So the Blue Soccer Jersey fits.
Elemental Has the Powers of Water and Thunder So the Water-drop and Thunderbolt pattern make sense.
Midnight Has a Star on his forehead because of his name.
Rosy is Pink because of the name Rosy and i plan on drawing in a bow soon.

And I'm not changing the color of my characters. And it's not UNPLEASANT to look at!
How dare you say that! Not Everything has to be perfect! I like my characters the way they are! If their So
Unpleasant to look at why is no one else complaing!!??
It Pisses me off that everyone expects you to know how to draw graphics by heart!
Not Everyone is an artist!

And About Hoops's 3D Glasses. I think I should replace the 3D Glasses With a Watch or something.

[underFlo]

how would a watch make sense though

[PersonNamedUser]

how would a watch make sense though

Why do you keep pointlessly arguing?

Can you think of an accessory that would fit?

[Mable]

Spinda is only saying his opinion as i see it. He isn't really being rude imo.

Oh wait right not everyone can take others opinion and criticism. Gave my 2 cents in.

[underFlo]

I didn't conplain about the Rex, I said he was one of the few that did make sense.
If you want to convey that he possesses elemental powers, there's better ways to show it, either by being super cliché with a wizard's hat or adding sparks or something.
A character's name doesn't justify their design.
I'm not even complaining about your artistic talent because tbh, there isn't really too much about those OCs. I'm saying that the concepts are poorly executed. If a character has a certain ability, reflect it in his design so you can get somewhat of a grasp on the character by looking at it.

The colors are unnatural for the most part because they're quite bright for the most part. Once again, the Rex is one of the better examples, the green and yellow colors make sense for a reptile. However, a pink porcupine or a blue Pokey don't make sense. As I said, look at how the Paper Mario series (especially the first two) handle that: For the most part, the colors aren't too outlandish and make sense, see Goombella once again or Lady Bow: Her color fits for a ghost because it's pretty close to white, and her designs makes it clear that she is, well, a lady. Bombette is pink which is alright because she's made of metal and that can have almost every color, and she manages to look unique as well. Kooper is one of the more average characters, but his clothing is still somewhat normal. General Bobbery (I can't remember his name and I'm too lazy to look it up) looks like a captain because of his wind-up wheel for example, and Lakilester just screams cool. All of those somewhat convey their character by just their design.

I can't tell you how to improve the Hoopster if I don't know his specific character traits or powers.

[PersonNamedUser]

Should I even give Hoops a Accessory at all?

[underFlo]

oh yes just make him a recolor thats really creative

[PersonNamedUser]

oh yes just make him a recolor thats really creative

No I need to give some accessory can you think of one?

[underFlo]

I can't tell you how to improve the Hoopster if I don't know his specific character traits or powers.