Oh hey, a .lvl file, that's...okay.
Anyway, my very short review:
This level was... too short and horribly designed. We have one section, which is very flat. There are many cutoffs, bad block and NPC placements and missing titles, and that's all in one section! I'll give you a screen with issues I found -
here.
There isn't anything to much say about this level, because it's very short, so, in total, deserves 1/10.
If you fix these issues I mentioned, your level can get out from hell (trash can) easily. Or read
Level Design Tips, it's useful.