Postby Imaynotbehere4long » Tue Mar 10, 2015 7:20 pm
There's really not much to say about this level; it's just another Basic Grass Level. It's fairly short and the only enemies it has are Goombas, Koopas, Piranha Plants, one Venus Fire Trap, and one rainbow shell. One of the Goombas is blue, but it has no significance; it's just there to be inconsistent. The biggest problem would be that if the player enters the warp that leads to the first Advance coin, he/she is stuck there since there's no warp leading back; I'm sure you would have noticed this if you tested the level. Plus, there are only three Advance coins when levels should either have 5 or 0 (with few exceptions).
Also, the color of the sky around the cloud (background2-36) is purple, but the color of the sky below it (background2-35) is blue. Since using background2-35 places background2-36 just above it, it would be wise to sprite-swap background2-36 so that its sky is the same color as background2-35.
Summary:
GOOD:
-Graphics aren't terrible.
-Music fits the level well.
-Block placement is okay.
BAD:
--LITTLE NPC VARIETY.
-Random blue Goomba.
--PLAYER CAN GET STUCK.
-<5 dragon coin sprite-swaps.
-Inconsistent sky color.
In conclusion: This level already isn't anything special, so the existence of an area where the player can get stuck just makes the experience worse. I'd say this deserves a 3/10.
