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bouncywheel10
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Postby bouncywheel10 » Sun Feb 22, 2015 8:33 am
Well, this is my second SMBX project, and this is turning out to be really good so far. Like my, "The Neverending Story" project, I;ve only made 2 levels so far: The intro and Level 1-1. However, I think you all will like this new project. If you get bored playing The Neverending Story, come play my new project, Super Mario Bros. X: Fantasy Zone! As I've said in my other forum, I need 3 types of people: Level Testers, Graphic Artists, and Level Designers. So, if you want 1 of these, "jobs", then show me some of your work for art or show me a video of how good you are at playing SMBX levels. Thanks!
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Here are some screenshots:
VERSION 1.1:
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Mable
- Luigi

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Postby Mable » Sun Feb 22, 2015 8:38 am
Why is there lava? In a overworld level.
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bouncywheel10
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Postby bouncywheel10 » Sun Feb 22, 2015 8:40 am
CaptainSyrup wrote:Why is there lava? In a overworld level.
Well, it's called "Fantasy Zone" for a reason, anything can happen. Should I change it to water?
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glitch4
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Postby glitch4 » Sun Feb 22, 2015 8:48 am
Also that level is bad and flat. There's even a clash with objects (smw + smb1, smb2, smb3 style).
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bouncywheel10
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Postby bouncywheel10 » Sun Feb 22, 2015 8:55 am
GLD4 wrote:Also that level is bad and flat. There's even a clash with objects (smw + smb1, smb2, smb3 style).
It's SUPPOSED to have a clash of objects. That's why it's called "Fantasy Zone"
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Choco
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Postby Choco » Sun Feb 22, 2015 9:07 am
But it looks bad. People don't like things that look bad.
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RoundPiplup
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Postby RoundPiplup » Sun Feb 22, 2015 9:30 am
Only thing overall is that most of the whole screenshots you posted seemed flat. If anything can happen, why not spice things up where it can have some interest?
Choco wrote:People don't like things that look bad.
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bouncywheel10
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Postby bouncywheel10 » Sun Feb 22, 2015 9:32 am
RoundPiplup wrote:Only thing overall is that most of the whole screenshots you posted seemed flat. If anything can happen, why not spice things up where it can have some interest?
OK, I'll try to change it. But thanks for the positive post on my other forum!
EDIT: I added screenshots of version 1.1, I hope you like them!
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BlimpFruit
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Postby BlimpFruit » Sun Feb 22, 2015 6:00 pm
Way, way WAY too many bullet bills in the 8th screenshot. Also, having a project called The Fantasy Zone isn't an excuse to have levels that have random npcs put all over the place. Sorry if that sounded rude, but it's just my 2 cents.
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Superiorstar
- Birdo

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Postby Superiorstar » Sun Feb 22, 2015 6:29 pm
Vanilla SMBX contest in a nutshell.
Seriously if you want a good example of putting two styles together look at Luigi's fight for the kingdom, because this right here is a bad example.
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Superiorstar wrote: Levels look boring and flat.
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RoundPiplup
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Postby RoundPiplup » Sun Feb 22, 2015 6:32 pm
One or more of the 1.1 pictures that you posted seems to look like a spammed amount of NPCs, preferably the bullet bill part.
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Mable
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Postby Mable » Sun Feb 22, 2015 7:29 pm
Hm...
The Thwomp doesn't fit, the Piranha shouldn't do that, no spamming ain't fun either. It may be called fantasy but it doesn't mean you gotta do it like this.
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bossedit8
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Postby bossedit8 » Mon Feb 23, 2015 4:06 am
BlimpFruit wrote:Way, way WAY too many bullet bills in the 8th screenshot. Touhou all over again!
For a Fantasy World, this Looks decently nice. So far, I can't really say of what to respect to happen but even then with all those elements that is in those screenshots, I do look Forward to Play it and see everything of what you have in store.
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