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Jurassic Yoshi

Postby xtremegamer51 » Sun Mar 02, 2014 8:04 pm

Here is something me and beanluv have been working on,it includes the sonic characters,yoshis(DUH!),and me and beanluvs OC,and yes,thats right,jack appears in this comic in sprite form.Since I only make drawing comics and not really sprite ones,I gave him the ideas(Even though he also got some ideas that we used)and he made it,and here it is,uploaded on this forum.
Episode 1
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Episode 2
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Episode 3
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Episode 4
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Episode 5
COMING SOON TO A FORUM NEAR YOU!

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Re: Jurassic Yoshi

Postby silent_ » Sun Mar 02, 2014 8:26 pm

What program do you use to make these comics? I am quite enjoying them so far, I wish you an beanluv luck.

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Re: Jurassic Yoshi

Postby Void » Sun Mar 02, 2014 9:15 pm

Thanks! And I Used Paint.net For The Comics

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Re: Jurassic Yoshi

Postby Karl Marx » Sun Mar 02, 2014 9:18 pm

Can you please make speech bubbles with white background for the text? I can't read any of it..

But its a nice spritecomic, don't get me wrong

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Re: Jurassic Yoshi

Postby Firespike33 » Sun Mar 02, 2014 11:50 pm

Uncle Sam wrote:Can you please make speech bubbles with white background for the text? I can't read any of it.
I agree. It would also be nice if you didn't capitalize every word, as reading it is a bit distracting.

Also, why does Beanluv appear to be trapped in one panel, when pop out in the next? Why didn't he just do that before? He's also called Beaniluv there as well, but I assume that's a typo.

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Re: Jurassic Yoshi

Postby xtremegamer51 » Mon Mar 03, 2014 2:54 pm

Firespike33 wrote:
Uncle Sam wrote:Can you please make speech bubbles with white background for the text? I can't read any of it.
I agree. It would also be nice if you didn't capitalize every word, as reading it is a bit distracting.

Also, why does Beanluv appear to be trapped in one panel, when pop out in the next? Why didn't he just do that before? He's also called Beaniluv there as well, but I assume that's a typo.
I think beanluv said that theres two ocs,beanluv and beanie and they can both mix together to become more powerful and since its and beanluv and beanie,I guess that would mean that when mixed together its beaniluv,for the whole trapped thing,he was able to break out since hes so powerful,I think,since that part was made in late october I think.

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Re: Jurassic Yoshi

Postby Firespike33 » Mon Mar 03, 2014 9:29 pm

xtremegamer51 wrote:he was able to break out since hes so powerful,I think,since that part was made in late october I think.
What I'm saying is, why didn't he just break out before?


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