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SMW - The Betrayal of Bowser (REVEAL PROJECT!)

Posted: Mon Apr 06, 2015 12:29 pm
by Ethereality

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Thanks for making logo by me



History:
A few years ago, Mario go on vacation. Suddenly, a UFO entered the Island of the Dinosaurs and the UFO captured Peach and permanent disappeared. Oh no! Peach was gone. Help find Peach. It was a day very terrible.

Features:
An SMW-styled graphics
Custom bosses
A classic adventure reminds to SMW.

Screenshots:
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Beta-testers (up to 5)
-Alex48
-Rawr
-Superiorstar
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Any comments/suggestions/criticisms/feedback.

Credits:

Valtteri
SMW Central
Nintendo

Userbar (NEW!)

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Also, happy 100th post! ;)

Re: Super Mario World - The Betrayal of Bowser

Posted: Mon Apr 06, 2015 4:29 pm
by Murphmario
That story has some Engrish, like "the Peach". Otherwise, nothing too special.

The graphics and screens look nice; not many errors as far as I can tell.

Re: Super Mario World - The Betrayal of Bowser

Posted: Mon Apr 06, 2015 5:39 pm
by Destiny
I bet you're gonna cancel this project like you did with the thousand others. But well, let's see how long this will last.

Those screens look nice... that's all I can say for now.

Re: Super Mario World - The Betrayal of Bowser

Posted: Mon Apr 06, 2015 9:50 pm
by HenryRichard
Murphmario wrote:That story has some Engrish, like "the Peach".
They're looking for a peach that they lost. Why they can't go to the supermarket and buy a new one is beyond me.
The recolored graphics look pretty nice, and the design looks fine.

Re: Super Mario World - The Betrayal of Bowser

Posted: Tue Apr 07, 2015 3:45 am
by Snowburger
This is all right.Some small cutoffs,nothing too bad.But it will probably get cancelled...

Re: Super Mario World - The Betrayal of Bowser

Posted: Tue Apr 07, 2015 8:46 am
by Destiny
Snowburger wrote:This is all right.Some small cutoffs,nothing too bad.But it will probably get cancelled...
There isn't any cutoff.

Re: Super Mario World - The Betrayal of Bowser

Posted: Tue Apr 07, 2015 7:47 pm
by Squishy Rex
Shady Flux wrote:I bet you're gonna cancel this project like you did with the thousand others. But well, let's see how long this will last.

Those screens look nice... that's all I can say for now.
Firstly, that was kind of rude and unnecessary. Please refrain from making those sorts of comments in future. Secondly, what is it that you like/don't like. "They look nice" only tells the creator so much, please be a little more constructive next time.
Snowburger wrote:This is all right.Some small cutoffs,nothing too bad.But it will probably get cancelled...
The same goes for you Snowburger, the author's track record should be being brought up by other users. The cut-off you speak of is also just the placing of two separate screens of the same level next to each other.

This project does look extremely nice so far though. Judging by the screens I almost thought it was a SMW Hack for a minute. I like the overworld level the most of the two, The colour combinations actually look really pleasing to the eye and overall it feels like it's a SMW level. The same I think could be said for the cave level. The green is a unusual choice, but it works. Despite it being a cave, it could use a few BGOs. Valtteri's GFX Pack has a cool selection of cave BGOs perfect for SMW levels. Good luck with your project Kasami!

Re: Super Mario World - The Betrayal of Bowser

Posted: Tue Apr 07, 2015 7:56 pm
by silent_
The background in the first screen hurts my eyes; try making it a little darker. Either way, it doesn't match the tileset much. Otherwise, looks okay so far. Nothing too special. Maybe try to make your levels more than "go from the left screen to the right screen".

Re: Super Mario World - The Betrayal of Bowser

Posted: Tue Apr 07, 2015 8:21 pm
by Ethereality
Thanks for the comments, the color indicates saturation and hue is improved. Do not worry! I will improve the level design. Of course!

Here the screenshots:

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About the project is impressive, because a few days ago. If you did the NPCs are good.

Re: Super Mario World - The Betrayal of Bowser

Posted: Thu Apr 16, 2015 4:49 pm
by Ethereality
DOUBLE POST!

New logo is updated, contains custom font Super Mario World belongs to BMatSantos.

Here the screenshot logo:

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Re: Super Mario World - The Betrayal of Bowser

Posted: Fri Apr 17, 2015 12:39 am
by Navi
This project is interesting, and those are good recolors.
I'll beta test.

Re: Super Mario World - The Betrayal of Bowser

Posted: Sat Apr 18, 2015 7:42 pm
by HenryRichard
Kasami wrote:DOUBLE POST!

New logo is updated, contains custom font Super Mario World belongs to BMatSantos.

Here the screenshot logo:

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I thought it needed a shadow. please use this version

Re: Super Mario World - The Betrayal of Bowser

Posted: Sun Apr 19, 2015 12:11 pm
by Ethereality
I've updated the new logo, but with shadows.

Here is the new logo:

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Thanks for the reviews! I wait for you! :D

Re: Super Bumpty World - The Betrayal of Bowser

Posted: Mon Apr 20, 2015 7:30 pm
by Ethereality
DOUBLE-POST!

Great news!
I changed the name of the episode "Super Bumpty World - The Betrayal Bowser!" Still already changed the player YI graphics.

Here the update screenshot:

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Also, I modified the new logo, look at this:

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Please remember to comment and feedback!

Re: Super Bumpty World - The Betrayal of Bowser

Posted: Thu Apr 23, 2015 5:07 am
by bossedit8
I really like your Project so far. Your screenshots Looks very nice for a regular SMW themed Level and for sure it's unique for having Bumpty as the main character instead of always be regular Mario. Looking Forward to your future work on this Project.

Re: Super Bumpty World - The Betrayal of Bowser

Posted: Sun Jun 14, 2015 12:56 am
by Ethereality
2 months ago, This project is not dead! I decided to make a background HDMA is easier.

Here is the screenshot:

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Re: Super Bumpty World - The Betrayal of Bowser

Posted: Sun Jun 14, 2015 1:27 am
by Superiorstar
Man, I hope you finish this project.

Re: Super Bumpty World - The Betrayal of Bowser

Posted: Sun Jun 14, 2015 5:23 am
by Navi
I love the background's colours.

Re: Super Bumpty World - The Betrayal of Bowser

Posted: Sun Jun 14, 2015 9:51 pm
by Murphmario
The story still has instances of "the Peach". You should fix that.

Re: Super Bumpty World - The Betrayal of Bowser

Posted: Wed Jun 17, 2015 5:11 pm
by Ethereality
I updated the story fixed in my project in first post. I think the grammar of story is good. No problem.