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REDO: The Neverending Story

Posted: Sat Feb 21, 2015 7:17 pm
by bouncywheel10
I'm working on a new episode called The Nevernending Story. It's going to be a LONG game and I need some help on it. I need level designers, level testers, and graphic artists. So, if anyone wants to apply, show me some of your best work for graphic design and level creating, and show me a video of how great you are at playing levels for level testers. Thanks!

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Here are some screenshots (hint: It's only the intro level and level 1 (Added two screenshots from Level 2), I've only gotten that far):
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Re: REDO: The Neverending Story

Posted: Sat Feb 21, 2015 7:18 pm
by Choco
You missed the major problem last time; screenshots. You need them.

PM me or another Level Judge with screenshots to get this unlocked.


Bouncywheel has told me he has screenshots. He has some time to add them himself.

Re: REDO: The Neverending Story

Posted: Sat Feb 21, 2015 8:01 pm
by bouncywheel10
Choco wrote:You missed the major problem last time; screenshots. You need them.

PM me or another Level Judge with screenshots to get this unlocked.


Bouncywheel has told me he has screenshots. He has some time to add them himself.
Finished! Screenshots added!

Re: REDO: The Neverending Story

Posted: Sat Feb 21, 2015 9:28 pm
by Danny
If it's a neverending story and the episode is called "The Neverending Story" then why does the second screenshot spoil the entire game by saying that the story will end?!?!?!!?!?!?!?!?!1?!?!?!?!??/!

Re: REDO: The Neverending Story

Posted: Sat Feb 21, 2015 9:39 pm
by bouncywheel10
8bitmushroom wrote:If it's a neverending story and the episode is called "The Neverending Story" then why does the second screenshot spoil the entire game by saying that the story will end?!?!?!!?!?!?!?!?!1?!?!?!?!??/!
First of all, I DON'T CARE that the story title is a lie. Second of all, I think this websote should have a bad word detector, because I'm 13 years old and you used the f-word in your post. That's a bad example for young people on here >:(

Re: REDO: The Neverending Story

Posted: Sun Feb 22, 2015 12:04 am
by Chip Potato
bouncywheel10 wrote:Second of all, I think this websote should have a bad word detector, because I'm 13 years old and you used the f-word in your post. That's a bad example for young people on here >:(
Oh boo hoo, someone said a naughty word on the internet, that's so sad. Clearly your whole life has been ruined by this man using the f-word in a post on an online forum.

Re: REDO: The Neverending Story

Posted: Sun Feb 22, 2015 1:21 am
by Superiorstar
You people need to calm down because fights like this can make you look immature, especially over the F-bomb, seriously.
Anyways about the screenshots... a little too generic for my taste.

Re: REDO: The Neverending Story

Posted: Sun Feb 22, 2015 5:48 am
by Mable
bouncywheel10 wrote: First of all, I DON'T CARE that the story title is a lie. Second of all, I think this websote should have a bad word detector, because I'm 13 years old and you used the f-word in your post. That's a bad example for young people on here >:(
It's not like this will be the only place someone says fuck. If you don't like those type of words the internet isn't the right place tbh.


Also yeah most of the Screens are uhm...bland no Coins, BGO, nothing. The Pipe out of the smb1 Castle doesn't look good neither. Also how are you supposed to get the 1-UP in the last screen. Mario ain't jumping so high.

Re: REDO: The Neverending Story

Posted: Sun Feb 22, 2015 6:43 am
by bouncywheel10
CaptainSyrup wrote:Most of the Screens are uhm...bland no Coins, BGO, nothing. The Pipe out of the smb1 Castle doesn't look good neither. Also how are you supposed to get the 1-UP in the last screen. Mario ain't jumping so high.
Hey, I did my best on it, I'm only 13 years old. What do you expect? A super hard area that's almost IMPOSSIBLE to complete?

Re: REDO: The Neverending Story

Posted: Sun Feb 22, 2015 7:29 am
by Mable
Age doesn't matter there. And it's impossible to get the 1-up like i said already bc Mario can't jump up there.

Re: REDO: The Neverending Story

Posted: Sun Feb 22, 2015 7:32 am
by bouncywheel10
CaptainSyrup wrote:Age doesn't matter there. And it's impossible to get the 1-up like i said already bc Mario can't jump up there.
There are invisible blocks Mario can climb. He jumps 4 blocks high, and the blocks are 3 blocks part. Counting every space, it's Empty, Empty, Empty, Block. 4 Blocks so Mario can climb it.

Re: REDO: The Neverending Story

Posted: Sun Feb 22, 2015 8:39 am
by Mable
Hm you're right just tested it by myself. But still the Pipe there out of the castle looks bad, and you still should add some coins and bgo into some of those screens imo.

Re: REDO: The Neverending Story

Posted: Sun Feb 22, 2015 8:42 am
by bouncywheel10
CaptainSyrup wrote:Hm you're right just tested it by myself. But still the Pipe there out of the castle looks bad, and you still should add some coins and bgo into some of those screens imo.
Wait, HOW did you test it?

Re: REDO: The Neverending Story

Posted: Sun Feb 22, 2015 8:46 am
by Mable
I created the same thing and tested it haha.

Re: REDO: The Neverending Story

Posted: Sun Feb 22, 2015 8:49 am
by bouncywheel10
CaptainSyrup wrote:I created the same thing and tested it haha.
Oh, I thought you found a way to download the episode and test the levels

Re: REDO: The Neverending Story

Posted: Sun Feb 22, 2015 9:11 am
by RoundPiplup
bouncywheel10 wrote:Hey, I did my best on it, I'm only 13 years old. What do you expect? A super hard area that's almost IMPOSSIBLE to complete?
Even 13 year olds can make good levels. It's probably based on their creavtivity or imagination. Yet, the images are pretty easy to beat and people will do say something about it...
Yet, as you keep going, you'll probably learn more.

Re: REDO: The Neverending Story

Posted: Sun Feb 22, 2015 9:27 am
by bouncywheel10
RoundPiplup wrote:
bouncywheel10 wrote:Hey, I did my best on it, I'm only 13 years old. What do you expect? A super hard area that's almost IMPOSSIBLE to complete?
Even 13 year olds can make good levels. It's probably based on their creavtivity or imagination. Yet, the images are pretty easy to beat and people will do say something about it...
Yet, as you keep going, you'll probably learn more.
Thanks RoundPiplip. Choco said my other episode "SMBX Fantasy Zone" was bad. I said it was supposed to have a clash of objects on purpose, but he still thought it was bad.

Re: REDO: The Neverending Story

Posted: Sun Feb 22, 2015 9:32 am
by RoundPiplup
When I said that people will say something I meant not in a good way...

Re: REDO: The Neverending Story

Posted: Sun Feb 22, 2015 9:34 am
by bouncywheel10
RoundPiplup wrote:When I said that people will say something I meant not in a good way...
Oh, OK. Sometimes my mind thinks that things are 1 way when they're actually another way.

Re: REDO: The Neverending Story

Posted: Sun Feb 22, 2015 2:13 pm
by Superiorstar
RoundPiplup wrote: Even 13 year olds can make good levels. It's probably based on their creavtivity or imagination. Yet, the images are pretty easy to beat and people will do say something about it...
Yet, as you keep going, you'll probably learn more.
You forget the creativity factor and experience, I was making levels since I was 12, Look at my levels now, all you need to do Bouncywheel10 is look in the screenshots thread or look up a playthrough, I knew my first levels were bad but we start somewhere right?
Anyways about the screenshots I think you need to fix the cut-off with the wood.