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The Dark Tower ( Cancelled)

Mario and Luigi were walking in the Mushroom Kingdom, and suddenly saw a strange tower in the distance. They decided to go for it.
Statick Clouds On the way they met a strange toad. He offered to help them along the way


Dungeon Of Past

Ehh... Uhm...

I... I really don't have anything to say. Sorry but, i don't think that someone will comment about your episode with so much less information. I think that you can make a better story. I don't want that you change, it's good. But "Bowser and Bowser JR build big DARK TOWER and portal in another dimension" is so less information. You can do something like:

"In a peaceful day in Mushroom Kingdom, Mario and Luigi saw King Bowser and Bowser Jr building a big tower, called DARK TOWER, and built a portal that can teleport anybody for another dimensions. So, Mario and Luigi runs to the Dark Tower, to destroy Bowser's Plan."

I like the screenshot, and the level name too. "Statick Clouds". Begin a episode with a sky level is a good addition and creative too.

Keep the cool and good luck!

the screenshot looks decent and the plot is better then half the plots ive seen

although for a project its best to have more then 1 screenshot and more information...

Thank you for your comments. About the story, I know, he is still being finalized.