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Posted: **Sun Feb 08, 2015 10:41 am**

So this is another level for Turtwig's Mushroom Kingdom Diametric episode, and also my second underwater level ever! I'm not that proud of this one, the level doesn't really have anything special, but i think it's a cool SMB1 water level.

Download Link:
https://www.dropbox.com/s/1isiz0hj9bgfv ... 9.zip?dl=0

!! Updates !!
-Made the level look nicer
-Gave bonusrooms some power ups
-Fixed glitches

Screenshots!

Spoiler: show

Credits for the graphics are in the folder!

Thanks to Turtwig and Bossedit8 for reviewing the level, much appreciated!

Posted: **Mon Feb 09, 2015 3:47 pm**

Level downloaded, review should come tomorrow.

Posted: **Mon Feb 09, 2015 3:49 pm**

Turtwig wrote:Level downloaded, review should come tomorrow.

Awesome! Thanks

Posted: **Mon Feb 09, 2015 4:14 pm**

Tomorrow came a lot sooner than expected ^_^
Anyway...

UNOFFICIAL REVIEW of UNDER THE SEA by MAN1234FK

A fairly straightforward underwater level.

Design (6/10)
Like I said, this is a fairly straightforward underwater level. Not that the design was bad, but there was nothing really mindblowing going on here. It was a nice and easy level, just swimming along and collecting Dragon Coins. Speaking of Dragon Coins, they were actually very well placed, so good job there.

Atmosphere (4/10)
Now, this might just be personal taste, but the way you used the green underwater blocks in this level looked pretty bad to me. All of the other SMB1 recolored graphics looked nice, though.

Other Comments:

Spoiler: show

This song took me 10 minutes to parody. Pls like it ;-;

Overall 5/10 (Average)
A decent level that will fit into my episode well! Good job!

Posted: **Mon Feb 09, 2015 4:22 pm**

Spoiler: show

Yeah tomorrow came pretty fast

but thanks a lot! and dat parody tho 10/10 XD

(but do you seriously want me to take out the green blocks? I can replace them with the sand and throw some of the green blocks inside it like in the bonusrooms)

Posted: **Mon Feb 09, 2015 4:49 pm**

Man1234FK wrote:
Spoiler: show
Turtwig wrote:Tomorrow came a lot sooner than expected ^_^
Anyway...

UNOFFICIAL REVIEW of UNDER THE SEA by MAN1234FK

A fairly straightforward underwater level.

Design (6/10)
Like I said, this is a fairly straightforward underwater level. Not that the design was bad, but there was nothing really mindblowing going on here. It was a nice and easy level, just swimming along and collecting Dragon Coins. Speaking of Dragon Coins, they were actually very well placed, so good job there.

Atmosphere (4/10)
Now, this might just be personal taste, but the way you used the green underwater blocks in this level looked pretty bad to me. All of the other SMB1 recolored graphics looked nice, though.

Other Comments:
THE WATER BLOCKS ARE ALWAYS GREENER
RIGHT HERE ON THE OCEAN LAKE
YOU DREAM ABOUT ADDING MORE OF THEM
BUT THAT IS A BIG MISTAKE
YOU SEE, THEY LOOK PRETTY BAD
MAYBE IT'S JUST MY OWN TASTE
STILL YOU SHOULD DELETE SOME QUICKLY
PLEASE DO IT NOW AND MAKE HASTE

OHHH

UNDER THE SEAAAA
UNDER THE SEAAAAAAA

ALL OF THESE GRAPHICS ARE REALLY REALLY AWESOME TO MEEEE

UP ON THE FORUMS I REVIEW
AND I REVIEW JUST FOR YOU

THIS LEVEL WILL GO
IN MY EPISODE SO

UNDER THE SEAAAAA

This song took me 10 minutes to parody. Pls like it ;-;

Overall 5/10 (Average)
A decent level that will fit into my episode well! Good job!
Yeah tomorrow came pretty fast but thanks a lot! and dat parody tho 10/10 XD

(but do you seriously want me to take out the green blocks? I can replace them with the sand and throw some of the green blocks inside it like in the bonusrooms)

That would take a TON of time. But if you really want to then go ahead

Posted: **Mon Feb 09, 2015 4:51 pm**

Turtwig wrote:
Man1234FK wrote:
Spoiler: show
Turtwig wrote:Tomorrow came a lot sooner than expected ^_^
Anyway...

UNOFFICIAL REVIEW of UNDER THE SEA by MAN1234FK

A fairly straightforward underwater level.

Design (6/10)
Like I said, this is a fairly straightforward underwater level. Not that the design was bad, but there was nothing really mindblowing going on here. It was a nice and easy level, just swimming along and collecting Dragon Coins. Speaking of Dragon Coins, they were actually very well placed, so good job there.

Atmosphere (4/10)
Now, this might just be personal taste, but the way you used the green underwater blocks in this level looked pretty bad to me. All of the other SMB1 recolored graphics looked nice, though.

Other Comments:
THE WATER BLOCKS ARE ALWAYS GREENER
RIGHT HERE ON THE OCEAN LAKE
YOU DREAM ABOUT ADDING MORE OF THEM
BUT THAT IS A BIG MISTAKE
YOU SEE, THEY LOOK PRETTY BAD
MAYBE IT'S JUST MY OWN TASTE
STILL YOU SHOULD DELETE SOME QUICKLY
PLEASE DO IT NOW AND MAKE HASTE

OHHH

UNDER THE SEAAAA
UNDER THE SEAAAAAAA

ALL OF THESE GRAPHICS ARE REALLY REALLY AWESOME TO MEEEE

UP ON THE FORUMS I REVIEW
AND I REVIEW JUST FOR YOU

THIS LEVEL WILL GO
IN MY EPISODE SO

UNDER THE SEAAAAA

This song took me 10 minutes to parody. Pls like it ;-;

Overall 5/10 (Average)
A decent level that will fit into my episode well! Good job!
Yeah tomorrow came pretty fast but thanks a lot! and dat parody tho 10/10 XD

(but do you seriously want me to take out the green blocks? I can replace them with the sand and throw some of the green blocks inside it like in the bonusrooms)
That would take a TON of time. But if you really want to then go ahead

Im sick at home so i really don't have anything else to do + i really like making my levels look better so it's not a problem

i'll start working on it now!

Posted: **Mon Feb 09, 2015 7:56 pm**

Oh man did you actually use the music--awww you're actually making something serious. Oh well, looks really really nice with the green blocks. As for those spike replacements, eh. Those don't look too much like spikes to me, but I forgive you for using them since it looks like you uh... SPIKED the difficulty just right?

Anyone?

Those spikes definitely give much needed difficulty to water levels, so I'll be appreciative of that and just see myself out now.

Posted: **Mon Feb 09, 2015 7:57 pm**

SilverDeoxys563 wrote:Oh man did you actually use the music--awww you're actually making something serious. Oh well, looks really really nice with the green blocks. As for those spike replacements, eh. Those don't look too much like spikes to me, but I forgive you for using them since it looks like you uh... SPIKED the difficulty just right?

Anyone?

Those spikes definitely give much needed difficulty to water levels, so I'll be appreciative of that and just see myself out now.

Oh you're so punny. Anyway, thanks!

Posted: **Mon Feb 09, 2015 7:58 pm**

I really like the graphics in this level.

But lets not discuss the rest of it just for ole sanity sake, mmmkay?

Posted: **Mon Feb 09, 2015 7:59 pm**

8bitmushroom wrote:I really like the graphics in this level.

But lets not discuss the rest of it just for ole sanity sake, mmmkay?

Haha, thanks!

Posted: **Mon Feb 09, 2015 8:09 pm**

I don't think that was a compliment.

Anyway, I'm gonna review this tomorrow. I swear, every time I don't make a post like this, someone else does it when I'm away.

Posted: **Mon Feb 09, 2015 8:19 pm**

Choco wrote:I don't think that was a compliment.

Anyway, I'm gonna review this tomorrow. I swear, every time I don't make a post like this, someone else does it when I'm away.

Yeah but he liked the graphics and i didn't really know how to respond otherwise

But thanks!

Posted: **Mon Feb 09, 2015 8:27 pm**

Choco wrote:I don't think that was a compliment.

It was though so I mean yeah.

I'm just not a big fan of water levels so for the sake of my sanity I'd rather not review any further.

Posted: **Mon Feb 09, 2015 8:30 pm**

8bitmushroom wrote:
Choco wrote:I don't think that was a compliment.
It was though so I mean yeah.

I'm just not a big fan of water levels so for the sake of my sanity I'd rather not review any further.

Oh now i get it XD i don't really like water levels either but designing them is pretty fun.

Posted: **Mon Feb 09, 2015 8:38 pm**

I'm not a big fan of water levels either, but this one doesn't look TOO bad.

Posted: **Mon Feb 09, 2015 8:40 pm**

Man1234FK wrote:Oh now i get it XD i don't really like water levels either but designing them is pretty fun.

And this is why a lot of water levels are underrated. So fun (read: interesting) to design, so tedious to play. I can't agree more.

Posted: **Mon Feb 09, 2015 8:46 pm**

Choco wrote:I'm not a big fan of water levels either, but this one doesn't look TOO bad.

I mean this is pretty much nothing compared to my last water level, but i decided to try and make a SMB1 themed level and i'm still pretty happy with the result

SilverDeoxys563 wrote:
Man1234FK wrote:Oh now i get it XD i don't really like water levels either but designing them is pretty fun.
And this is why a lot of water levels are underrated. So fun (read: interesting) to design, so tedious to play. I can't agree more.

Yeah it's kinda sad also that they are so underrated. You rarely see any water levels posted here

Posted: **Mon Feb 09, 2015 8:49 pm**

I swear ever since the SMB1 underwater levels were created, nobody has made another one since.

Posted: **Mon Feb 09, 2015 8:51 pm**

8bitmushroom wrote:I swear ever since the SMB1 underwater levels were created, nobody has made another one since.

Haha, true. That's why i tried to make this one a bit different with hazards and bonusrooms.

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