A beautiful story[that rhymes]

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A beautiful story[that rhymes]

Postby TheWrathofDarkBowser » Wed Dec 24, 2014 2:22 am

Once in a small town,
lived Little Miss Toast in her favorite gown,
She was a nice little bread who had a red hat,
some people don't like red though,and that's that.
She slapped a guy named Jim for this reason,
he said "Red hats aren't in season."
He filed a lawsuit against her mom.
They didn't care,the judges name was Dom.
She was walking down the street and fell over
She exploded into a burst of bread crumbs.
That didn't rhyme,
I'm dumb.

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Re: A beautiful story[that rhymes]

Postby Danny » Wed Dec 24, 2014 3:06 am

It's called a Poem.

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Re: A beautiful story[that rhymes]

Postby Nanaya » Wed Dec 24, 2014 11:47 am

Nice poem...
Rating: 7.8

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Re: A beautiful story[that rhymes]

Postby Chip Potato » Sun Dec 28, 2014 10:17 am

I like how the poem switched from the AA rhyme scheme to ABAB at the end.

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Re: A beautiful story[that rhymes]

Postby HeroOfRhyme » Mon Dec 29, 2014 7:51 am

How sad. Does her remains get devoured?

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Re: A beautiful story[that rhymes]

Postby Witchking666 » Mon Dec 29, 2014 1:40 pm

I wisg there was a video with it...


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