Fix Bowser's Pipes.

[TheWrathofDarkBowser]

This is my first level.I probably should not upload it.But in this level,you fix Bowser's lava pipeways for a -clears throat- "reward".This level is probably awful.But I can practice.I need reviews!

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[PROX]

based on what I see, the level looks kinda cramped. It' going to be hard to navigate through the area. You might want to increase the height of the ceiling by 1 or 2 panels

[JupiHornet]

UNOFFICIAL REVIEW OF
Fix Bowser's Lava Pipes by The Wrath of Dark Bowser:

Well...this level was certainly interesting...

Design (2/10)
This was pretty solid for a first level, but there were still flaws here. None of the warps are correct, and at the beginning it is possible to get stuck with no way out. You can't die, there is no timer. This means you either have to reset or use Shadowstar. NEVER DO THIS. EVER. The part with the security breach was rather spammy, with enemies EVERYWHERE. Rinkas, Dry Bones, oversized Firebars; it's all too much. The Mother Brain battle was alright, except you used SMW Goombas as the weapon. The generator for the Goombas is a bit too fast, making it easy for the floor to get cramped. Then the level basically ends and ARGGHH I HAVE BEEN SCAMMED BY BOWSER >:c

Atmosphere (4/10)
This level has no custom graphics or music, but the atmosphere was still quite nice. Bowser didn't kidnap the princess but the lava in his pipes is blocked, and he can't look "evil" with them so he sends you to fix them. This is a neat little story that really adds to the level. After you beat Motherbrain you realize that you have been scammed, and that there is no reward even though Bowser said there was. The only thing is, this ultimately didn't make much sense. Why do you fight Motherbrain in an airship, when the rest of the level is a cave? Then you go from the airship to a castle? I don't get it.

Other Comments: This was very good for a first level (certainly better than mine :S)

Overall 3/10 (Average)
This level wasn't great, but it was an awesome first level. Keep trying and you'll get better

[TheWrathofDarkBowser]

Thats not an airship.More of a wood fortress.Thanks for the review though!Really appreciate it.

[JupiHornet]

Thats not an airship.More of a wood fortress.Thanks for the review though!Really appreciate it.

But the background is called "airship" and it uses the airship blocks ._.