Super Mario Bros. X Forums

Amazing adventure in the rainbow universe! Download

Looks nice i will play it and write a unoffical review on it cause i like reviewing things

Edit: goldens unoffical review some tips

Sorry, golden, but you have quite a bit to learn about reviewing. Allow me to explain:

golden wrote:level design:4.56/10 the level design is not really good but not bad either

Throwing out a random score without giving any major or helpful criticism is something you should avoid.

golden wrote:difficulty:4.71/10 the level is not really hard but near the end it is

I don't see what you're aiming for here. Are you telling him he should have balanced difficulty? Hard difficulty? Easy difficulty?

golden wrote:graphics:fits well with the level and looks good:8.9/10

If you're acting like there's nothing wrong with the graphics, why'd you give him a 8.9 and not a 10?

golden wrote:total score:5.67/10 a fun level and is worth your time to play

You averaged it wrong. He should have gotten a 6.05.

---

This level looks pretty nice. The background fits the level well. However, if I'm not mistaken, those pipes have 1x1 pixels. Also, I'd recommend giving the question blocks and maybe even the coins a rainbow-ish feel.

This looks fun. I love the pipes.

It as expired.