Sandy Crags (Version 2 Out!)

[CraftedPbody]

So I took the input I got and I expanded the level a bit. Hopefully it is even better now.

Images:

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Downloads:

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Version 1 (Shorter)

https://www.dropbox.com/s/ijt62dh92iw2s ... s.rar?dl=0

Version 2:

https://www.dropbox.com/s/cbmt2khs9wv0a ... 2.rar?dl=0

Credit: (if I miss any please feel free to tell me.

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Sednair
Squishy Rex
Chaoxys

[AirSeus]

This looks pretty decent, why is there a nsmbds water tree in the 6th screen though?

[Eternity]

Review - Sandy Crags

Design: 6/10

Honestly, I wasn't expecting much it first, but I was surprised once I started playing. This level actually introduces a few interesting gimmicks (falling Moai statues, Grrrols, rising sand platforms) and manages to introducing them pretty well. The design was well done, and even if a bit linear, the level was fun to play through. There's one major problem with it, through: it's way too short. The level doesn't manage to develop well the gimmicks used, and ends suddenly when it actually starts. I would love to give it a better score on design, but it definitely needs to be extended some, as it doesn't feel like a complete experience for now.

Aesthetics: 3/5

Don't have much to say aesthetic-wise; pretty simple and generic, but it's not bad. The decoration works fine and the SMB3 tileset expansion is used pretty well. The redrawn-styled enemies don't fit and clash with the more simplistic SMB3 graphics, though.

Overall: 6/10 (9/15)

I highly recommend making it longer and exploring the gimmicks a bit more. This level definitely has potential, but it needs some work.

[CraftedPbody]

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Review - Sandy Crags

Design: 6/10

Honestly, I wasn't expecting much it first, but I was surprised once I started playing. This level actually introduces a few interesting gimmicks (falling Moai statues, Grrrols, rising sand platforms) and manages to introducing them pretty well. The design was well done, and even if a bit linear, the level was fun to play through. There's one major problem with it, through: it's way too short. The level doesn't manage to develop well the gimmicks used, and ends suddenly when it actually starts. I would love to give it a better score on design, but it definitely needs to be extended some, as it doesn't feel like a complete experience for now.

Thank you, I will improve on it.