Piranha Hills

AlexGKubbed · Postby **AlexGKubbed** » Sat Nov 15, 2014 1:29 pm

[sup]Piranha Hills[/sup]

-This is my first post! This is a simple level

, it will be part of my future first episode!
Enjoy!

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ENJ0Y!

-Screenshot

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JupiHornet · Postby **JupiHornet** » Sat Nov 15, 2014 1:42 pm

Are there any screenshots?

underFlo · Postby **underFlo** » Sat Nov 15, 2014 1:44 pm

Turtwig wrote:Are there any screenshots?

DarkMatt wrote:A) We do not require that you supply a screenshot or video when posting your thread

JupiHornet · Postby **JupiHornet** » Sat Nov 15, 2014 1:44 pm

Nickname wrote:
Turtwig wrote:Are there any screenshots?

DarkMatt wrote:A) We do not require that you supply a screenshot or video when posting your thread

I know, I was just asking if he had any.

KateBulka · Postby **KateBulka** » Sat Nov 15, 2014 1:59 pm

He not know how to make screen? 1 - press f12 2 - post screen in imgur\photobucket 3-

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Superiorstar · Postby **Superiorstar** » Sat Nov 15, 2014 2:02 pm

Nickname wrote:
Turtwig wrote:Are there any screenshots?

DarkMatt wrote:A) We do not require that you supply a screenshot or video when posting your thread

Well the Official rules state that if a level or project is not supplied with a screenshot the topic will be locked.

underFlo · Postby **underFlo** » Sat Nov 15, 2014 2:05 pm

Superiorstar wrote:
Nickname wrote:
Turtwig wrote:Are there any screenshots?

DarkMatt wrote:A) We do not require that you supply a screenshot or video when posting your thread
Well the Official rules state that if a level or project is not supplied with a screenshot the topic will be locked.

http://www.smbxgame.com/forums/v ... =32&t=5904

Eternity · Postby **Eternity** » Sat Nov 22, 2014 12:20 pm

Review - Piranha Hills

Design: 4/10

Honestly, while it has some potential, the level's design needs some work; it's way too short, and doesn't actually try to develop the Piranha theme; it ends up feeling incomplete due to that. Extending it and working a bit on some gimmicks would make it way better. There needs to be some sort of indication on those grounded piranha plants, as they are a bit confusing as they are now, and it looks just plain weird; I would recommend keeping them in pipes, personally. Some more variation on the enemy choice would also be nice.

Design-wise I'd recommend restarting the level, though; right now it's rather annoying to play through, mostly due to the piranha plant placement and weird small platforms. Some of the level also feels unnecessarily cramped, such as the first volcano lotus. The slopes also don't feel very natural, but that's more of a personal issue I have.

Aesthetics: 2/5

Nice, average aesthetics. It isn't anything new or creative, but works well. There are a few strange choices here and there, such as the SMB1 piranha plants in a primarily SMB3-styled level, but they're mostly acceptable.

Overall: 4/10 (6/15)

Even if it has a "just another level" feel to it, it could actually be a fun experience with some more work. I recommend trying to make your levels a bit longer