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Hentai Rainbow Woodland

Posted: Thu Nov 06, 2014 7:39 pm
by Destiny
One of my newest levels. I will make a better version (with ceiling and better NPC placement), but for now, deal with it.

Some +18 hentai pics:
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Also, this is not a joke level, the real name of it isn't "Hentai Rainbow Woodland' and it didn't have hentai, Nyan Cats or Rainbow Dash references/easter eggs.

Credits to Veltteri for the Bullet Bills (except the giant one).

Re: Hentai Rainbow Woodland

Posted: Thu Nov 06, 2014 10:07 pm
by Danny
If you're going to make a level, please don't name it Hentai Rainbow Woodland, that's not really necessary. And if it does actually contain any Hentai when I download this, you're not going to have a good time. I suggest you change the name of the level.
Kei wrote:I will make a better version (with ceiling and better NPC placement), but for now, deal with it.
Using memes isn't a good first impression, especially if you use it in a passive-aggressive manner such as this. Please refrain from posting incomplete levels, or at least make one final version of your level and only release new ones if you need to fix bugs, not to recreate the level entirely.

Re: Hentai Rainbow Woodland

Posted: Thu Nov 06, 2014 10:30 pm
by Danny
Other than the name, there isn't much that is too bad about this level.

Gameplay 4/10: What this level really falls short on is length, and it's also extremely linear that I could speedrun it to a point, with the springboard being the only stopping point. You need to raise the Banzai Bills above the ground by one tile, that way there is a reaction time to duck, since you can hit the duck button faster than you can jump over a Banzai Bill that just appears. I would also refrain from putting a Dragon Coin beyond the level's end, especially if the level end is a star. I thought you had missed one at first, though a second run through I found it at the way end of the level. I feel as if you could have hid it better.

Graphics & Music 5/10: The music is pretty fitting for the level, although I felt as if you could have used something that wasn't Running in the 90's. The graphical choice is questionable, while it was alright, the many flashing blocks made my eyes bleed after a while. Other than that the graphics seem pretty standard.

Backgrounds 2/10: There was a considerate lack of background objects and I feel you could have thrown in some more. Not much else to add here other than the backgrounds, or lack thereof.

Replay Value 2/10: First run through I got everything except that last Dragon Coin which you could have hid in the sky or something. It's so flat and linear that there is no replay-ability, sorry, I didn't feel that vibe.

FINAL VERDICT: 4/10 You could have done better but I guess you didn't. Good job trying though.

Re: Hentai Rainbow Woodland

Posted: Thu Nov 06, 2014 10:40 pm
by Destiny
8bitmushroom wrote:
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Other than the name, there isn't much that is too bad about this level.

Gameplay 4/10: What this level really falls short on is length, and it's also extremely linear that I could speedrun it to a point, with the springboard being the only stopping point. You need to raise the Banzai Bills above the ground by one tile, that way there is a reaction time to duck, since you can hit the duck button faster than you can jump over a Banzai Bill that just appears. I would also refrain from putting a Dragon Coin beyond the level's end, especially if the level end is a star. I thought you had missed one at first, though a second run through I found it at the way end of the level. I feel as if you could have hid it better.

Graphics & Music 5/10: The music is pretty fitting for the level, although I felt as if you could have used something that wasn't Running in the 90's. The graphical choice is questionable, while it was alright, the many flashing blocks made my eyes bleed after a while. Other than that the graphics seem pretty standard.

Backgrounds 2/10: There was a considerate lack of background objects and I feel you could have thrown in some more. Not much else to add here other than the backgrounds, or lack thereof.

Replay Value 2/10: First run through I got everything except that last Dragon Coin which you could have hid in the sky or something. It's so flat and linear that there is no replay-ability, sorry, I didn't feel that vibe.

FINAL VERDICT: 4/10 You could have done better but I guess you didn't. Good job trying though.
I need to say I agree with you. After I uploaded, I played the level again and I was not satisfied with myself. This level had everything to be good, but it ended up being horrible, I could have done better.

I planned to make a joke level, it turned into a seriously level, but at the end, it turned into a pretty bad level. I will improve my level design next time.

Thanks for the review.