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New Level! I hope you like it very... Credits:
Shikaternia (TNTtimelord's Ripped Pack)
Maury-300
MyNameIsEric52 (for background and galoomba)
Squishy Rex
Legend-Tony
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By the way, backround move with player
Download - https://www.mediafire.com/?2k69k9oy3c7go43

Screens broken.?

@Waddle Derp: Its for you broken... i not know why...

playing it now. ill review it in a sec.
review: Ant Land;By MyNameIsEric52
Atmosphere:
This level sure was visually appealing. the tileset was used well, and the decoration was placed well too. the foreground clouds also added a certain charm to the level, and it really gave me a dreamy feel. The background also fitted well, but I'm pretty sure you didn't make it... Anyway, this level LOOKS good.
6/10
Gameplay/Enemy Placement:
The enemies were placed nicely, and I like the galoomba's faces. but the level didn't really feel like and Ant Land, for there weren't many ants. the ?-blocks were placed okay too. BUT. the biggest flaw of this level; it took 15 seconds. this level was way way waaaay too short, whoch was a sad thing.
5/10
Overall:
This level had potential, but it was way too short. the rest was okay.
5.5/10, Average.
good level, but too short. try making it alot longer.

Review #4 (Unofficial)

Looks/Atmosphere:
I really like what you done here. I felt like I was on an island in the midst of the clouds, so I like the atmosphere. The background had a unique idea, being the fact how it scrolls with you as you move. I thought this was pretty cool. However, the background looks pretty odd, from where parts of it looked cutoff. It wasn't major, but regardless. Overall, the level looked pretty cool, and it had a nice and welcoming atmosphere. Not much to talk about here.

8.5/10

Level Design/Gameplay:
It was fun... but there was something that killed this factor, being the fact how this level is so short. Seriously, this level is possible to beat in under a minute, which isn't good at all. Extend the length of your levels. The obstacles were nice, at least, but you could've done so much better if the level had a bigger length. About the ants, it was a creative idea, but there wasn't many of them. Isn't this supposed to be the gimmick of the level? ? Use more than you did.

3/10

Overall Rate: 5.75/10

Zeldamaster12 and Waddle Derp: Well written reviews I must say that.

I'll review this level later today unless Zeldamaster12 or Waddle Derp wants their reviews to get approved :P

You can approve of mine