Probably the most Ghetto pony story you ever heard

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Probably the most Ghetto pony story you ever heard

Postby Superiorstar » Sat Nov 01, 2014 1:06 am

PART ONE BACHES
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One day in Equestria, Superiorstar was doing his errands when suddenly a giant ass piece of shit hit him in the face, then he answered: "What the hell? which one of you dicks just hit me with that giant piece of shit!?!?!?!?"."It was I, the great and powerful Trixie!!' Trixie bragged. "Well now I'm gonna take a shit, ON YOUR FACE" Superiorstar screamed. Trixie immediately jumped in a helicopter only to realize He was in the helicopter, "OH shit" she said. "Exactly" Superior said. Then he took the biggest shit in his entire life. Trixie was covered in smoldering puss filled shit. after that she used one of those cleaning tricks with her horn. "Fuck you Superior" She said. "(This shit has gone out of hand)" Trixie said, "(I need a way to deal with him once and for all)..." Then, an idea popped in her head...". Suddenly Superiorstar Shrank to the size of a football. "WTF is this? Am I on crack or something!?" He said. "No, but soon you will be in my crack" Trixie said. Superiorstar replied saying: "Fuck that" then jumped about 13 inches across the room. "I can see the little hole in-between you're legs" He stated. "You little Pervert :oops:". after she realized that the unlucky pony is directly under her ass she shat down on him. "I hate shit" he said. "I've had enough I'm going to bed" Trixie said. "good night then"
He said.

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Re: Probably the most Ghetto pony story you ever heard

Postby silent_ » Sat Nov 01, 2014 1:50 pm

I can't say I found this entertaining at all. All of the curse words were distracting, and you should start a new paragraph every time there's dialogue.


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