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Heres a new level, It's the first story
based level I have made!

I thought it looked a bit short, so I started a poll.
Screenshots:

Review at your service.

This level was really short, but at the same time, great. The mushrooms were nicely placed, although you could have spaced them out better. Also, please add some pipes and Piranhas; otherwise, your level doesn't feel very Mario-y. Furthermore, towards the beginning and end of the level, there weren't much coins. Adding some more would be great. On a positive note, anyways, this level's scenery placement was fantastic. I didn't like those little berry-thingies on the SMB2 trees, though. They didn't match the atmosphere much and they would as ridiculous as it sounds fit more for a Christmas level. Speaking of atmosphere, by the way, the music didn't really capture the feel of this level you were going for. Try something custom. Also, you should have really added some slopes to this level. Otherwise, you nailed the atmosphere. As for the boss, it was really cool and even actually memorable. However, you should make it to where you only had to fought him two times, not three, because after two times, fighting the same guy can get repetitive and boring.

Yeah, this ended up being a rather short review, but that's because the level didn't offer much. Didn't mean it was bad, though. In fact, it was great. 7/10.