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The amazing 5 inch wonder

Posted: Fri Sep 26, 2014 1:54 am
by Superiorstar
There was once a guy who lived in the land of Allenus, the land of felines. which is over the land of wonders, which he moved to actually. anyways, so he was talking to his father about his love of his life: Anny, which he had been dating for quiet a while now, and this is where the story begins...
Chapter 1: the pilot?
Brawnwells = the father
Andy = the main character
Sukai Amocai = the foreign exchange student
Anny = main character's girlfriend
Joey = the school principal
Gollian = the hobo
Vennteri = crazy old man
All the characters so far...
Spoiler: show
Brawnwells: so... what did he say?
Andy: I'm not sure dad, something about marijuana an...
Brawnwells: WHAT? Did he...
Andy: No dad... I didn't take any.
Brawnwells: Oh thank god... I thought you were smoking weed, I know my son would never do that right?
Andy: Sigh* Yes dad, I know.
Brawnwells: watch your tone of voice Mr., that is what got you in trouble with Principal Joey.
Andy: I know dad, I know.
*All of a sudden Anny pulls up with her car
Anny: hi Andy hi Mr. Andy
Brawnwells: My name is Brawnwells, but you have to call me Mr. oscard
Anny: Ok, I'll try to remember next time.
Anny: Come on Andy let's go.
Andy: Ok, By dad, see you later
Brawnwells: ;)
I'll post pone Chapter 1 here since it is late for me.

Re: The amazing 5 inch wonder

Posted: Sun Sep 28, 2014 11:04 am
by Tango
This is a funny fan fic. I liked.

But... i think that i smell... a bit of... SMG4...?

Continue with a good job.