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Random poems

Posted: Thu Sep 25, 2014 12:52 pm
by Karl Marx
OK, I'm not a poet by any means, so this is really bizzare, but I suddenly felt compelled to write a poem for whatever reason, what do you guys think about it?
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all my life is now is
working
studying
playing
planning
panicking
relaxing
sleeping
TV watching
eating


until one day I find that i


cannot breathe
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have you ever looked in the mirror
a real hard long look
noticing every freckle
hair
dimple
zit
and deformity


and hated every facet about it?
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if only I could hear say
"I love you," but alas, that'll be the day
When pigs fly,
Or perhaps the day I die

Re: Random poem

Posted: Thu Sep 25, 2014 3:44 pm
by silent_
This is motherfucking brilliant and this needs parodied, like, right now.

Re: Random poem

Posted: Thu Sep 25, 2014 6:39 pm
by Murphmario

Re: Random poem

Posted: Thu Sep 25, 2014 6:41 pm
by Magna
This is beautiful. I can relate to the poem.

Re: Random poems

Posted: Thu Sep 25, 2014 11:05 pm
by Karl Marx
Updated with more poems I guess

Re: Random poems

Posted: Thu Oct 30, 2014 4:37 pm
by auto2112
Quill wrote: No.

Re: Random poems

Posted: Thu Oct 30, 2014 4:47 pm
by Danny
auto2112 wrote:
Quill wrote: No.
Please don't bump old topics unless you have something constructive to add.

Re: Random poems

Posted: Thu Oct 30, 2014 4:56 pm
by Valtteri
You're not a moderator 8bitmushroom.

Re: Random poems

Posted: Thu Oct 30, 2014 7:46 pm
by Danny
Valtteri wrote:You're not a moderator 8bitmushroom.
And does it matter that I reminded somebody of the rules? No, because it doesn't hurt anybody and it shouldn't matter in the first place. Moderator or not, I should still be able to remind somebody of the rules. If I hadn't of reported the post, a staff wouldn't have come as quickly as they did.