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Hello everyone, this is another custom level I felt like making and I was trying to make a summer type level. There also a secret star hidden in this level. I hope you guys like it!! Download link: http://www.mediafire.com/download/acfoj ... slands.zip

This, indeed, looks promising, and according the screens, it seems to have a nice atmosphere and it also seems to have great placement. I'll see if I can get around reviewing it sometime in the next week.

I like the ground blocks you used!
And good job!

Samuel wrote:I like the ground blocks you used!
And good job!

Thank you, Samuel!! I used Raster Graphic Pack which is in this link: http://www.smbxgame.com/forums/v ... =31&t=3466

Playthrough Made:



Original Link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d9wLJomtgv0

bossedit8 wrote:Playthrough Made:

Spoiler: show

Original Link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d9wLJomtgv0

Thanks for the video play through, Bossedit8!! I never heard about this error 11.

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i really really really like the way this looks honestly. if i get a chance i'll be sure to play through this

This level looks really nice. One thing that has surprised me is how the SMW background fits so well with everything else that is SMB3-styled/recoloured. In any case I will be waiting for any other levels you release. This one is very well done GameClip477.

When I saw the title, I thought that it would just be another Basic Grass Level, but this is actually pretty good. Although there weren't a variety of NPCs used, the level design was varied just enough to keep the level from becoming repetitive, but then again, it wasn't a very long level to begin with. Plus, needing to find the leaf and keep it in order to get the secret star was a neat design choice, even if it is a bit tricky to get a good running start in that area.

The only complaints I have is that at the end of section 1, you have the block-wall turn back to the right, making it seem like there's a secret up there when there really isn't. Plus, background-29 has 1x1 pixels and you messed up the shading for background-2 (assuming you made those graphics).

In conclusion: this is a very well made level, even if it is relatively short and easy, and what few flaws it does have are very minor ones. I'd say this deserves a 7/10.

Luigifan2010 wrote: this
i really really really like the way this looks honestly. if i get a chance i'll be sure to play through this

Nice that you like that screenshot and glad that your going to playthrough it.

Squishy Rex wrote:This level looks really nice. One thing that has surprised me is how the SMW background fits so well with everything else that is SMB3-styled/recoloured. In any case I will be waiting for any other levels you release. This one is very well done GameClip477.

Glad you like it too!! I actual made a new level that was for the CC9 which right here: http://www.smbxgame.com/forums/v ... =63&t=6742

Imaynotbehere4long wrote:When I saw the title, I thought that it would just be another Basic Grass Level, but this is actually pretty good. Although there weren't a variety of NPCs used, the level design was varied just enough to keep the level from becoming repetitive, but then again, it wasn't a very long level to begin with. Plus, needing to find the leaf and keep it in order to get the secret star was a neat design choice, even if it is a bit tricky to get a good running start in that area.

The only complaints I have is that at the end of section 1, you have the block-wall turn back to the right, making it seem like there's a secret up there when there really isn't. Plus, background-29 has 1x1 pixels and you messed up the shading for background-2 (assuming you made those graphics).

In conclusion: this is a very well made level, even if it is relatively short and easy, and what few flaws it does have are very minor ones. I'd say this deserves a 7/10.

Oh darn, the reason this hadn't gotten an review is because this: http://www.smbxgame.com/forums/v ... =69&t=5642. I was patiently waiting for Kep to review my level seeing the pros and cons but, at least you review it since because I thought that no one was ever gotta do it. I'm happy that my level was finally reviewed by someone. Thanks for review and I'll improve more, Imaynotbehere4long.