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Ethereality
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Postby Ethereality » Sun Jul 13, 2014 8:07 pm

I am starting a new episode. The episode just to call it "Super Mario World - The Cataclysmic Trap"!
History:
Mario and Luigi go on vacation in the Mushroom Kingdom, Bowser ... but escaped again. The Princess Peach was imprisoned in the castle. Koopalings and evil Bowser makes a cryptic plan! Help! Toad Yoshi cares about who you captured the Peach! I started a new adventure!
Worlds:
World 1: Mushroom Kingdom
World 2: Desert Oasis
World 3: Forest of Happy
World 4: Plains of Ice
World 5: Cave Shelter
World 6: Fey of Pipes
World 7: Clouds of Heaven
World 8: Hell Devil
World 9: Rainbow Merry
Demos:
No demos, I'll post a new demo will be soon!
Old Screenshots:
New Screenshots:
New screenshots: 2014-07-23
New screenshots: 2014-07-28
Release Date:
There will be no release date because my working project.
Beta-testers:
1. bossedit8
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Credits:
Valtteri
Last edited by Ethereality on Mon Jul 28, 2014 1:49 pm, edited 6 times in total.
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Zant
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Postby Zant » Mon Jul 14, 2014 8:03 pm
Lookin' good so far, though adding some coins and more bgos wouldn't hurt.
And the first screenie needs more enemies.
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silent_
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Postby silent_ » Mon Jul 14, 2014 8:25 pm
Negativity:
-It's all right if you're going for a linear SMB3 feel, but still, try to make your episode fresh and unique. Perhaps add some custom graphics even though these are not vital.
-Add some coins and definitely add some pipes with Piranha Plants.
-Consider adding some sizables or ceiling - an empty space with nothing above you is typically not good design.
-Why is this called The Bramble Invasion when it's about Bowser kidnapping the Peach? Also, there is no world based off of brambles, which defeats the purpose of the name.
-Think about it: How can brambles invade you? While they are hurtful, it's not like they are Koopas or Goombas or humans or anything like that.
-The history made no sense, all I got was "Peach was imprisoned in the castle".
-Hell Devil is NOT a good world name unless there is lots of fire (lava and fire DO have a difference) and there is a devil boss fight, and Rainbow Merry certainly isn't a good world name because it simply doesn't make sense unless you name it Merry Rainbow.
Positivity:
-SMB3-esque atmosphere; this is executed very well
-Great NPC placement it seems
-You are a professional at knowing the right time to place SMB3-styled questions blocks and bricks.
-Good slope use; not too excessive
Fix these and you're on your way to a great episode. Keep it up.
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AirShip
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Postby AirShip » Mon Jul 14, 2014 8:36 pm
There is no hack SMW with that name?
The episode will have something to do with brambles?
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goombaguy
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Postby goombaguy » Thu Jul 17, 2014 8:41 am
It's pretty basic. Not very many coins. But I won't say anything else because I didn't see any screenshots of other levels yet. If I did, I might be judging you wrong. I'll be back! 
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Ethereality
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Postby Ethereality » Sat Jul 19, 2014 1:00 am
Oh, no! I lost all files of the project. Close this thread.
I realize the most designated levels and improve the project.
Last edited by Ethereality on Sat Jul 19, 2014 3:56 am, edited 1 time in total.
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MrPunchia
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Postby MrPunchia » Sat Jul 19, 2014 1:23 am
MarioBros980 wrote:Oh, no! I lost all files of the project. Close this thread.
Again?! Your computer is a jerk.
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Ethereality
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Postby Ethereality » Sun Jul 20, 2014 7:00 pm
Level 1-2 Screenshots:


At the next level soon! The level was a great time. More levels will coming soon! I post a demo will be coming soon ...
Stay tuned...
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Postby Ethereality » Mon Jul 21, 2014 2:40 pm
Double-post!


Level 1-3 is complete! Contains design improvements and atmosphere. An introduction level contains many enemies and effects including Super Mario World-esque style
More levels coming soon!
That's all.
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Ethereality
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Postby Ethereality » Mon Jul 21, 2014 2:57 pm
Close this thread.
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HeroLinik
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Postby HeroLinik » Mon Jul 21, 2014 3:01 pm
Locked on request. PM me or another staff member if you want it reopened.
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Ethereality
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Postby Ethereality » Mon Jul 21, 2014 3:27 pm
Sorry, castlewars! I do not post more threads again. I already one!
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silent_
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Postby silent_ » Mon Jul 21, 2014 7:42 pm
So... is this going to get locked or not, castlewars?
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Postby Mable » Tue Jul 22, 2014 9:36 am
No Kep it's not. Mariobros wanted it locked Castlewars locked it and then Mariobros made the same one again. So Castlewars locked the new one and reopened this one here because it's pointless locking it and post the same project again.
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Ethereality
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Postby Ethereality » Wed Jul 30, 2014 12:29 pm
My project is cancelled, no longer updates. Close this thread.
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HeroLinik
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Postby HeroLinik » Fri Aug 01, 2014 12:23 pm
Locked on request.
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