Giant koopa shells on beach (need review)

[DimitrisPowerSeven]

My second level that i post and it's a beach level

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http://www.mediafire.com/download/4izgq ... _beach.zip

[lighthouse64]

My second level that i post and it's a beach level

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Spoiler: show

Download
http://www.mediafire.com/download/4izgq ... _beach.zip

This level seems good alright. I'm going to play it soon.

[SuperMarioBuilder16]

Hello!

Gameplay 8/10: Really relaxing and fun level, but there's a bug, the challenges, on the second challenge, when i defeat the koopas, the koopa shell is still there

Theme 9/10 (Supposed to be a 10/10): I can say you did stick to the theme really well... no clashes, but leafs are normally used for sky levels, you can use mushrooms

Level Design 7/10: It was great, but there was some hills and turns that you cant get to certain places (not the star) like at the end of the first area, there was a pipe that you needed to get on one side and jump quickly.

Other 6/10: There is always problems in a level, thing is what im saying is the challenge room isnt big space so the player can move in any direction, like how im gonna do the 10 trials. Also, NPC placement is off a bit, like a player is happily running to the end and he sees the goomba spiny and trys to jump but he hits the roof (Im not so sure if its a concern or not)

Score 7.5/10
Good jog

P.S. I use a real time calculator of determining the score, I add it all up and I divide it by 4 and thats your final score
P.S.S. I was just bored so I used my judging template


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[HenryRichard]

Theme 9/10 (Supposed to be a 10/10): I can say you did stick to the theme really well... no clashes, but leafs are normally used for sky levels, you can use mushrooms

Umm... It doesn't matter what powerups he uses. "Leafs (supposed to be leaves BTW) are normally used for sky levels?" Really, it doesn't matter what powerups he uses. The rest of the review was good though.

Regarding the level, it looks pretty good. I like the theme of giant koopa shells.

[SuperMarioBuilder16]

Theme 9/10 (Supposed to be a 10/10): I can say you did stick to the theme really well... no clashes, but leafs are normally used for sky levels, you can use mushrooms

Umm... It doesn't matter what powerups he uses. "Leafs (supposed to be leaves BTW) are normally used for sky levels?" Really, it doesn't matter what powerups he uses. The rest of the review was good though.

Regarding the level, it looks pretty good. I like the theme of giant koopa shells.

IK, thats why i said, (Supposed to be a 10/10), so its 8/10

[DimitrisPowerSeven]

Can someone review this level?

[Radishl]

Looks really interesting, I will review it tommarow.

[Imaynotbehere4long]

I don't completely agree with SuperMarioBuilder16's review, so I made my own:

First of all, there were no giant Koopas in this level, so the title is a misnomer. Second, although the overall level design was good, the bonus area in section 2 was poorly designed. As soon as one layer of Koopas is killed, the next layer appears instantly, and this caused me to get hit. I recommend having !s appear where the Koopas are going to appear for a few seconds before they actually appear. Aside from that section, I think that the stars were too easy to collect; they weren't in the player's way, but they weren't very well hidden or well guarded, either. Also, the red ? switch is invisible and barely has any indication as to it's location, meaning very few people will be able to get all of the star coins without searching for the switch in the editor. I recommend moving it three units to the left.

In conclusion:

Although this level has its problems, I still found it to be very enjoyable. I'd say this deserves a 6/10.