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NOTE:This is my first project and i am a beginner. I am not that good at level designing but i am going to do this anyway.

I am sorry but I cannot continue this project for now. ( Cause of school) I will try to get back to it later.
HOWEVER, The first demo is still up, so you can play the first couple levels if you want.
They are short, and they have lots of room for improvement, but right now I cant work on it so...yeah.


Welcome to my new episode! It's called The Lost Episode.

I Here are the screenies:










Demo 1 Complete! Here is the download (sendspace)


https://www.sendspace.com/file/e3zsnx

First of all, welcome to the forum!
The screenshot of the world map looks a bit bad. Errors are here:
Second screenshot looks ok.
The third one is a cave level, so make it more "inside".

Fixed. Also The 3rd screen was a bonus room.

Cut offs and clash everywhere. Fix that.

Blue Greed wrote:Cut offs and clash everywhere. Fix that.

The only cut off in the screenshot is in the world map which he already fixed.
Where the clash is, I don't see any.

michel wrote:

Blue Greed wrote:Cut offs and clash everywhere. Fix that.

The only cut off in the screenshot is in the world map which he already fixed.
Where the clash is, I don't see any.

He is using two different types of world map tiles in the first screenshot and using a SMW background with SMB3 cave tiles in the third.

Blue Greed wrote:and using a SMW background with SMB3 cave tiles in the third.

That's not clash.

Screenshot 1:
Not very much ground do you think? And also, there are some graphics that go to different games than the others. The ground color is different too.

Screenshot 2:
Pretty nice for a first level. Lack of enemies and bad coin placement, but I like the idea.

Screenshot 3:
It seems a little dull and not very much things to collect. And also the pipe and tile set aren't very good looking together. Try a SMW pipe and SMW cave tile set instead.

Overall:
A lot like my first project . There is no events or custom graphics. I would try looking up tutorials on youtube to help you. Also, if you are willing to use Paint for making custom graphics, do not. I like Adobe Photoshop better.

Conclusion:
I am very glad you are starting to play this. I might try playing this once your finished. Keep up the good work, and discovering new things on SMBX. I will be back to check on this later.

New Screens! Here is 1 old one and 1 new one.
Does anyone know how to upload more than 3 screens?

For a first episode, great!
For an episode in general, a bit below average. But still, decent enough for people to play it. And of course, over time your level design skills will get better, so it will most likely be above average!

Christian07 wrote:First of all, welcome to the forum!
The screenshot of the world map looks a bit bad. Errors are here:

Spoiler: show

Second screenshot looks ok.
The third one is a cave level, so make it more "inside".

Huh??? I see all the screenshots.

lighthouse64 wrote:

Christian07 wrote:First of all, welcome to the forum!
The screenshot of the world map looks a bit bad. Errors are here:

Spoiler: show

Second screenshot looks ok.
The third one is a cave level, so make it more "inside".

Huh??? I see all the screenshots.

What do you want from me and what do you mean with that phrase

I adivse using a site like postimage and not using the default attachment upload thing because back in the old forum most of the attached files couldn't be seen again due a mainteance act.