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Familiar Fortress (Level made by me)

Posted: Sun Jun 29, 2014 9:50 am
by Chip Potato
AKA I painstakingly recreated the World 2-4 Fortress from the original Super Mario Brothers, only to slightly change it.

Screenshots;
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Download;
http://www.mediafire.com/download/lm5to ... rtress.rar

I hope to a lot of deities I'm doing this right, because if not, this is going to be embarrassing.

Credits are in the readme.

Re: Familiar Fortress (Level made by me)

Posted: Sun Jun 29, 2014 12:59 pm
by Zant
Looks pretty good, but the flags' color is too bright for a bgo. Also, the background could be blue-ish to fit more with the tileset/theme and you could add more bgos(pillars, lamps, etc).

Re: Familiar Fortress (Level made by me)

Posted: Sun Jun 29, 2014 3:41 pm
by Chip Potato
Zant wrote:Looks pretty good, but the flags' color is too bright for a bgo. Also, the background could be blue-ish to fit more with the tileset/theme and you could add more bgos(pillars, lamps, etc).
Thanks! I did the things you said I should probably do, and the level's got a lot more life to it, I think.

Re: Familiar Fortress (Level made by me)

Posted: Sun Jun 29, 2014 3:52 pm
by Zant
Looks better, but the pillars don't match the color of the tileset and the background could be less saturated.

Re: Familiar Fortress (Level made by me)

Posted: Sun Jun 29, 2014 10:37 pm
by Chip Potato
Zant wrote:Looks better, but the pillars don't match the color of the tileset and the background could be less saturated.
Again, thank you. I've edited the pillars and the background.

Re: Familiar Fortress (Level made by me)

Posted: Sun Jun 29, 2014 11:05 pm
by FanofSMBX
Wow! Those Blue Dry Bones look awesome! The person who made them deserves an uprep! :D

This level was good, but short. I liked the boss and the uniqueness of not being Bowser. I liked how blue everything was.

Re: Familiar Fortress (Level made by me)

Posted: Mon Jun 30, 2014 9:17 am
by Chip Potato
FanofSMBX wrote:Wow! Those Blue Dry Bones look awesome! The person who made them deserves an uprep! :D

This level was good, but short. I liked the boss and the uniqueness of not being Bowser. I liked how blue everything was.
I actually edited them to have blue shoes. That's... about all I did. The original graphic was made by someone else, whose name I can't find at the moment.

Re: Familiar Fortress (Level made by me)

Posted: Sat Jul 05, 2014 2:50 pm
by Maruiki
Level Review: Familiar Fortress

Summary: I'm impressed. This is a pretty good level. It's very short. It's not perfect, but it's pretty good. The custom graphics are really good for the most part. I'll get to more of that in the section below. Anyways, moving on. The block placement was pretty good. Not many NPCs except for the Toad, the plants and the boss at the end. The background is pretty good. I'd say it fits the level. Oh, and the music. Classic castle music. It's awesome. Also, about the boss part. I don't know why you made the axe activate the battle. I think you should make the boss activate the battle. Next up, the power ups. There's a perfect amount of power ups in this level. Please don't think about adding more. :P

Well, I'd say that's a wrap for this section. Let's move on to the graphics!

Graphics: The graphics are pretty good. The only one I'm not really a fan of are the Thwomps. I like the everything else. That blue lava though. Not much else to say about the graphics.

I guess I'm going to end it off here. Like I said, it's a really, REALLY short level, but it's good.

Level Score: 6

Level Status: Pretty Good