Familiar Fortress (Level made by me)

Chip Potato · Postby **Chip Potato** » Sun Jun 29, 2014 9:50 am

AKA I painstakingly recreated the World 2-4 Fortress from the original Super Mario Brothers, only to slightly change it.

Screenshots;

Spoiler: show

Download;
http://www.mediafire.com/download/lm5to ... rtress.rar

I hope to a lot of deities I'm doing this right, because if not, this is going to be embarrassing.

Credits are in the readme.

Zant · Postby **Zant** » Sun Jun 29, 2014 12:59 pm

Looks pretty good, but the flags' color is too bright for a bgo. Also, the background could be blue-ish to fit more with the tileset/theme and you could add more bgos(pillars, lamps, etc).

Chip Potato · Postby **Chip Potato** » Sun Jun 29, 2014 3:41 pm

Zant wrote:Looks pretty good, but the flags' color is too bright for a bgo. Also, the background could be blue-ish to fit more with the tileset/theme and you could add more bgos(pillars, lamps, etc).

Thanks! I did the things you said I should probably do, and the level's got a lot more life to it, I think.

Zant · Postby **Zant** » Sun Jun 29, 2014 3:52 pm

Looks better, but the pillars don't match the color of the tileset and the background could be less saturated.

Chip Potato · Postby **Chip Potato** » Sun Jun 29, 2014 10:37 pm

Zant wrote:Looks better, but the pillars don't match the color of the tileset and the background could be less saturated.

Again, thank you. I've edited the pillars and the background.

FanofSMBX · Postby **FanofSMBX** » Sun Jun 29, 2014 11:05 pm

Wow! Those Blue Dry Bones look awesome! The person who made them deserves an uprep!

This level was good, but short. I liked the boss and the uniqueness of not being Bowser. I liked how blue everything was.

Chip Potato · Postby **Chip Potato** » Mon Jun 30, 2014 9:17 am

FanofSMBX wrote:Wow! Those Blue Dry Bones look awesome! The person who made them deserves an uprep!

This level was good, but short. I liked the boss and the uniqueness of not being Bowser. I liked how blue everything was.

I actually edited them to have blue shoes. That's... about all I did. The original graphic was made by someone else, whose name I can't find at the moment.

Maruiki · Postby **Maruiki** » Sat Jul 05, 2014 2:50 pm

Level Review: Familiar Fortress

Summary: I'm impressed. This is a pretty good level. It's very short. It's not perfect, but it's pretty good. The custom graphics are really good for the most part. I'll get to more of that in the section below. Anyways, moving on. The block placement was pretty good. Not many NPCs except for the Toad, the plants and the boss at the end. The background is pretty good. I'd say it fits the level. Oh, and the music. Classic castle music. It's awesome. Also, about the boss part. I don't know why you made the axe activate the battle. I think you should make the boss activate the battle. Next up, the power ups. There's a perfect amount of power ups in this level. Please don't think about adding more.

Well, I'd say that's a wrap for this section. Let's move on to the graphics!

Graphics: The graphics are pretty good. The only one I'm not really a fan of are the Thwomps. I like the everything else. That blue lava though. Not much else to say about the graphics.

I guess I'm going to end it off here. Like I said, it's a really, REALLY short level, but it's good.

Level Score: 6

Level Status: Pretty Good