The Factory! (Update) [Extended]

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The Factory! (Update) [Extended]

Postby SuperMarioBuilder16 » Fri Jun 20, 2014 7:36 pm

AHHHHHHHH!!!!!
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I made a new level called "The Factory"! Now Extended!!

Link Here: https://www.mediafire.com/?xijr2eecw4hxc9w

Every Custom Graphic has been fixed!!!!! :D

Every Opinion Has Been Fixed/Added!

Today, I will be updating the screenshots!

Video (From Murphmario):
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Also, i would like to credit Shikaternia for his awesome graphics pack!!!!

I did take a little content from zlakerboy357 on his Mushroom Mayhem too, it was awesome!

I did the acid and the bridges and the TNT thing, but you cant see it cause its hidden, I WILL fix that.
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Re: The Factory!

Postby Murphmario » Fri Jun 20, 2014 9:21 pm

The bridge, the bridge rails, the TNT, and the acid have 1x1 pixels. What program did you use?

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Re: The Factory!

Postby SuperMarioBuilder16 » Fri Jun 20, 2014 9:49 pm

Murphmario wrote:The bridge, the bridge rails, the TNT, and the acid have 1x1 pixels. What program did you use?
Paint, derp
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Re: The Factory!

Postby RoundPiplup » Fri Jun 20, 2014 10:19 pm

SuperMarioBuider16 wrote:
Murphmario wrote:The bridge, the bridge rails, the TNT, and the acid have 1x1 pixels. What program did you use?
Paint, duh
The way you did it seemed to look that pixelated stuff. Maybe you should try to double check it?

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Re: The Factory!

Postby Murphmario » Fri Jun 20, 2014 10:52 pm

SuperMarioBuider16 wrote:
Murphmario wrote:The bridge, the bridge rails, the TNT, and the acid have 1x1 pixels. What program did you use?
Paint, duh
Normal or .NET?

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Re: The Factory!

Postby HenryRichard » Fri Jun 20, 2014 11:20 pm

Export as a .png and then turn it into a .gif using an online converter, or get a real image editor, like gimp or paint.net. Other than that, the design looks good, I'll try it out.

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Re: The Factory!

Postby SuperMarioBuilder16 » Sat Jun 21, 2014 6:07 am

HenryRichard1234 wrote:Export as a .png and then turn it into a .gif using an online converter, or get a real image editor, like gimp or paint.net. Other than that, the design looks good, I'll try it out.
I dont get it... wats the point if its 1 pixel?

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Re: The Factory!

Postby SuperMarioBuilder16 » Sat Jun 21, 2014 6:10 am

SuperMarioBuider16 wrote:
HenryRichard1234 wrote:Export as a .png and then turn it into a .gif using an online converter, or get a real image editor, like gimp or paint.net. Other than that, the design looks good, I'll try it out.
I dont get it... wats the point if its 1 pixel?
Oh i see, if you look super closely, you can see that stuff is there, il fix it!!!!

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Re: The Factory! (Update)

Postby Murphmario » Sat Jun 21, 2014 1:00 pm

SuperMarioBuider16 wrote:The only thing i didnt fix is the bridge rails, you dont notice them...
I do notice them. They have 1x1 pixels.

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Re: The Factory! (Update)

Postby SuperMarioBuilder16 » Sat Jun 21, 2014 2:24 pm

Murphmario wrote:
SuperMarioBuider16 wrote:The only thing i didnt fix is the bridge rails, you dont notice them...
I do notice them. They have 1x1 pixels.
How do you notice them when you play it??? Its so missable.

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Re: The Factory! (Update)

Postby RudeGuy » Sat Jun 21, 2014 2:26 pm

SuperMarioBuider16 wrote:
Murphmario wrote:
SuperMarioBuider16 wrote:The only thing i didnt fix is the bridge rails, you dont notice them...
I do notice them. They have 1x1 pixels.
How do you notice them when you play it??? Its so missable.
Really? I notice them too.

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Re: The Factory! (Update)

Postby HeroLinik » Sat Jun 21, 2014 2:32 pm

SuperMarioBuider16 wrote:
Murphmario wrote:
SuperMarioBuider16 wrote:The only thing i didnt fix is the bridge rails, you dont notice them...
I do notice them. They have 1x1 pixels.
How do you notice them when you play it??? Its so missable.
It's quite easy to spot 1x1 pixels. They look really grainy and out of place when you compare it with SMBX's graphics as they are made out of 2x2 pixels. Here's a standard SMB3 mushroom...

Image

...now here it is again with 1x1 pixels...

Image

It just doesn't fit in when compared to the picture above that, don't you think?

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Re: The Factory! (Update)

Postby SuperMarioBuilder16 » Sat Jun 21, 2014 2:34 pm

Derp, its grey and black, its really missable... OK FINE IL FIX IT!! :D

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Re: The Factory! (Update)

Postby RudeGuy » Sat Jun 21, 2014 2:40 pm

SuperMarioBuider16 wrote:Derp, its grey and black, its really missable... OK FINE IL FIX IT!! :D
It isn't missable, even with gray colors.

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Re: The Factory! (Update)

Postby RudeGuy » Sat Jun 21, 2014 2:59 pm

I played this level and it doesn't look bad, but there were something that I didn't like. First, the music doesn't fit. Second, at the end there were strange things, like the SMB3 grass blocks which make clash, the factory that doesn't finish on the top (there aren't any blocks above the pipe) and the "pipes" at the SMB3 roulette exit, which don't fit because there you are outside the factory.

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Re: The Factory! (Update)

Postby SuperMarioBuilder16 » Sat Jun 21, 2014 3:15 pm

Christian07 wrote:I played this level and it doesn't look bad, but there were something that I didn't like. First, the music doesn't fit. Second, at the end there were strange things, like the SMB3 grass blocks which make clash, the factory that doesn't finish on the top (there aren't any blocks above the pipe) and the "pipes" at the SMB3 roulette exit, which don't fit because there you are outside the factory.
i get it, ill replace the grass with growth acid, but wat do you mean "the factory that dosen't finish on the top??

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Re: The Factory! (Update)

Postby Murphmario » Sat Jun 21, 2014 3:26 pm

I agree, that music does not fit.

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Re: The Factory! (Update)

Postby RudeGuy » Sat Jun 21, 2014 3:28 pm

SuperMarioBuider16 wrote:but wat do you mean "the factory that dosen't finish on the top??
I knew that nobody won't understand it. Anyways here:
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As you see, on the top there aren't any blocks, which looks bad in an inside place. Put some blocks there.

EDIT: Uh, oh, wrong image.

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Re: The Factory! (Update)

Postby SuperMarioBuilder16 » Sat Jun 21, 2014 4:06 pm

Christian07 wrote:
SuperMarioBuider16 wrote:but wat do you mean "the factory that dosen't finish on the top??
I knew that nobody won't understand it. Anyways here:
Spoiler: show
Image
As you see, on the top there aren't any blocks, which looks bad in an inside place. Put some blocks there.

EDIT: Uh, oh, wrong image.
Ok i fixed it, I see that the Athletic Theme is in the factory

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Re: The Factory! (Update)

Postby SuperMarioBuilder16 » Sun Jun 22, 2014 11:27 am

Knux wrote:There isn't a huge ammount I can say as it was a pretty short level.

I enjoyed it, though. Definitely well-balanced difficulty wise. I don't know if it was intended or not, but the random jolts the layers would cause every now and then gave off that clanking-workplace kind of
feel, if you get what I mean. :P
It was a tad short though, and I never understood why the green Koopas couldn't hurt me. Also, there was no exit to the level as the end goal was missing.

Other than the obvious goal mistake, I DID enjoy this level. I rate it a 6.5/10.
I was editing and erasing the background on the exit and i forgot to add it :3


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