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Brickroad Gardens

Posted: Sun Jun 08, 2014 10:00 am
by Marina
Greeeeeen

A relatively short level I made for the first world my Episode that currently doesn't have a name yet.

It's SMB3 Wood themed with lots of greens.
The secret exit/stars requires you to collect all eight red coins and then talk to Toad, the coins shouldn't be too hard to find.

Screenshots:
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Old Screenshots:
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Video:

by bossedit8

Download:
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Credits:
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Redigit for the piranha plants and the chest
The grass was made by me

Re: Brickroad Gardens

Posted: Sun Jun 08, 2014 2:11 pm
by RudeGuy
It seems a good level. I've seen no flaws, apart for the pipe under the sizable block in the 1st screenshot.

Re: Brickroad Gardens

Posted: Sun Jun 08, 2014 5:48 pm
by Marina
Christian07 wrote:It seems a good level. I've seen no flaws, apart for the pipe under the sizable block in the 1st screenshot.

I know that it was a bit risqué to use pipes in combination with sizeables, and on second thought I might change that, but thanks for the feedback :)

Edit: I changed up the parts with the pipes on the sizables and replaced them somehow. Download link is updated, as well as the screenshots.

Re: Brickroad Gardens

Posted: Thu Jun 12, 2014 9:13 am
by bossedit8
My Playthrough:



Original YouTube Video Link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L8fe8INGT9g

Re: Brickroad Gardens

Posted: Fri Jun 13, 2014 1:18 am
by Maruiki
Level Review: Brickroad Gardens

Summary: Wow, this is an excellent level. It kind of reminds me of the first Super Mario Bros 3 level. Yes, KIND OF. Enough rambling on, let's get to the first thing. The blocks were placed very nicely. I don't really see anything wrong with them. Also, I love the Bob-omb Battlefield music. It's really fitting. There were about just enough power-ups to beat the level which was really nice. I'd say there's only one con. Here's a screenshot:
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As you can see, there's a red Koopa just walking right through mid-air. Or so the hills make it seem like it is. You should probably do something about this to make it look more realistic. There really isn't much more to say about this section, so now that we're done here, I'd say we move on to the custom graphics! Err, that is if there are any.

Graphics: There are no custom graphics for this level.

Well, I guess I'd say that wraps it up. This is a nice level. Keep up the good work!

Level Score: 7.5

Level Status: Pretty Good

Re: Brickroad Gardens

Posted: Fri Jun 13, 2014 5:21 am
by Marina
Cool! I just have one question, doesn't the level scoring system say that levels with scores of 6/10 to 8/10 belong in the "Pretty Good" section? I'm not 100% sure how the judging system all together works, I'm just wondering :D

Re: Brickroad Gardens

Posted: Fri Jun 13, 2014 6:14 am
by RudeGuy
GLuigiX wrote:Cool! I just have one question, doesn't the level scoring system say that levels with scores of 6/10 to 8/10 belong in the "Pretty Good" section? I'm not 100% sure how the judging system all together works, I'm just wondering :D
Yeah, that's right. Mauriki, you should move this into the pretty good section.

Re: Brickroad Gardens

Posted: Fri Jun 13, 2014 10:14 am
by zlaker
Moved to the right sub-forum.

Re: Brickroad Gardens

Posted: Fri Jun 13, 2014 1:51 pm
by Maruiki
GLuigiX wrote:Cool! I just have one question, doesn't the level scoring system say that levels with scores of 6/10 to 8/10 belong in the "Pretty Good" section? I'm not 100% sure how the judging system all together works, I'm just wondering :D
Sorry about that. Ice moved it to the right sub-forum.
Ice wrote:Moved to the right sub-forum.
Oh, yeah. Sorry about that.

Re: Brickroad Gardens

Posted: Fri Jun 13, 2014 1:56 pm
by zlaker
Maruiki wrote:
Ice wrote:Moved to the right sub-forum.
Oh, yeah. Sorry about that.
Yeah it's okay. Everyone does a mistake. I remember when moved a level to the General forum xD